Inspirational Poetry: Proposing In A New Way

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Just about to put a ring on that finger

Holding tight your hand

you look at me with the happiest face

Is there a reason to think of this as a mistake?


I said, hold on! Gotta find something

going to make a move

that not woman can imagine

Got a hold of my friends form the fire department

signs are ready,"would you marry me"?

suddenly my heart skips that beat

composing myself I take a deep breath

especial woman that I decided to marry

not even worry, not even scary


Fellow friends from the fire department, set the rain as planned

I'm ready to take that step as a man

follow me guys to fulfil this sweet surprise

My woman turned into a swan in love

saw my announcement in disguise

Walk to her already soaking wet

crying with joy she gets close to me

I kneel down the way it should be

my friends cheer me up and I say the words!

would you marry me?

would you be a part of me?


artificial rain pumping enough tension

her fingers ready to get attached to my connection

looking up on the sky to catch the rainbow and her own bliss

embracing our commitment through a breeze wind


finally she composes herself and gives her permission

'Yes, I will" the most loving answer to my desperation

more neighbors joining and her two kids too

come sing my song: 'The promise, by when In Rome'

and make this day the best one for this troubadour


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carriethomson 5 years ago from United Kingdom

OH! did u actually do that? real rain would have been great!! but when it dosent artifical can be equally great:) again voted up :)

carrie


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Lord De Cross 5 years ago Author

No Carrie, was inspired by a muse i have around. Can't tell who. LOL. Thanks carrie... imagination knocked my door again

LORD


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Terishere 5 years ago

I loved reading this, and I was going to ask the same question as Carrie, did you do that?

voted up Lord de cross!

Terri


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Lord De Cross 5 years ago Author

Terishere, in order to write...we go into our own reasonable creativity... you guys..or ladies want more ideas how to propose to a woman?


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Terishere 5 years ago

No...you did a fine job here :)


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Lord De Cross 5 years ago Author

Thanks! Usually take a time to make a hub fun... seriousness in writing is not my style.

LORD


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Terishere 5 years ago

You have a gift for that. For myself, to make a fun poem, would be much harder for me.


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Lord De Cross 5 years ago Author

Terry, we are unique! and we all are valuable! yOUR HUBS also are interesting..

LORD


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Terishere 5 years ago

I agree...our uniqueness is what make this world wonderful.

Thank you Lord!

Terri


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carriethomson 5 years ago from United Kingdom

humm i guess ur muse is feeling flattered because of this hub and the fact that she is acually someones muse :-)

carrie


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Lord De Cross 5 years ago Author

Thanks carry. I feel flattered myself. Thanks for stopping by.


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icciev 5 years ago from Kuwait

Really amazing man, what romantice poem story. awesome voted up

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