Tender Feelings

Give Thanks

Relax and feel your skin tingle gently

Each area of your body covered little at a time

You can feel your tiny hairs slowly rise

Breathing slow and letting all your troubles go

Thinking back to every good experience

Feeling each sensation come to life

Your body remembers every step you have ever walked

Every breath you taken

Now let each thought come and go

A new thought replace the old

A greater feeling unleashed

One that maybe was held back or repressed

Now we can show it in full view

Comforting and reassuring

Pleasing and teasing

You welcome these thoughts freely

To trickle down like water from a huge fountain

To find their way where they can do the most good

Relax even more

Feel every tense muscle go lose

Your eyes shut but seeing each part of your body crystal clear

Looking at each shape and size thinking how wonderful each part works in great harmony

Your whole body in sinc

Feeling more relaxed than before

Appreciating your whole body for taking care of you

Protecting you and keeping you safe

Now seeing each part and it's function performing automatically on key

How marvelous and magnificient

Priceless and unique

So extraordinary in every way

Moving forward from this day on

Taking more time to appreciate what we have

The gift of life that keeps giving

When all is quiet

Make peace with ourselves

Concentrate on all our good and let the other unneccesary thoughts go

We move and breathe with such ease

All our aches and pains have no place to hide

They quickly evaporate in the air

For we have all the energy and beauty we will every need

Walk away from this moment refreshed and with so much joy

You are the one that makes it happen

Whenever possible you can easily come back here

To feel not just good but your whole body repaired and strong

Our lovely bodies are so important and they should get the highest honor

One that we treat with proper care all the time not once a year

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kj force 4 years ago from Florida

DREAM ON...reading through the poem, the last line made me pause and think..

sounds like words of a physician " proper care all the time, not once a year"..( yearly physicals)..little light hearted humor..The poem was very good, your words lately give way to reflecting on your relationship with spouse..very poignant/emotional without being sappy..thumbs up my friend..


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shara63 4 years ago from Delhi

considering our own self to be the most precious thing in our life we show respect towards God for his blessings & the treasure he has given us for our custody and care...and so will be able to respect others as well!

nice hub with a gud depth..congrats!


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one2get2no 4 years ago from Olney

Very erotic thoughts.....I enjoyed your prose.


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

kj force To feel instead of seeing .To understand new meaning.A different point of view.Thanx so much for your insight.shara63 How quickly we forget all the wonders right under our nose.To enjoy is to love a little more.Loving all those who care.What wonderful words have a reat day.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

You are so right. We must be in sync with our bodies and we must take care of them especially if we're hoping to lead a long life. Well said.


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

one2get2no Thoughts come to my mind freely and open.There are so many avenues to take.As long as we share and enjoy I am so happy.Experiencing all the wonderful beauties in llife is a life worth remembering.Thanx so much for the comment and so nice to see you.Gypsy Rose Lee When our bodies our healthy our minds can expand to new heights.Nurturing life.Thanx so much and may today be only the first step in the right direction with so many more good ones to follow.


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Joy56 4 years ago

we take so much for granted....... that hub made me think, thanks for taking the time to write it.


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Joy56 4 years ago

life is a learning curve.....


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

joy56 My greatest joy is knowing I am alive and well.To reach out to a friend and share the passion we both have is amazing.Especially when you thought it was gone forever.My smile grows bigger by the minute.Thanx so much for reading.


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

Joy56 Most of the curves throw me for a loop.But I hang in there knowing that I am on the right track and my friends have been here before me and they have made it and so can I.Thanx for your support.


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Joy56 4 years ago

we all make it somehow......... nice if the road was not so bumpy .... but friends do help A LOT.


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

Joy56 I am beginning to think I am on a roller coaster ride and I didn't have to pay lucky me.


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Joy56 4 years ago

ha ha..... enjoy it while it lasts.


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

Joy56 You will have to pick other stories to open the door to more exciting thoughts and ideas.Maybe you ran out of steam and the ride is over.It was fun with many thrills. Thanx for reading.


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Joy56 4 years ago

ah no i only just got on da ride.................


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

Joy56 There is alot more where that came from.It is like an old balloon ride with a friend do you remember???The adventure never stops it only gets better and better.Thanx for showing up at the right time and making my day.


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

Yes, the body can give back but so much if we don't treat it well. Good food for thought.


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

picklesandrufus Our potential is limitless and lets push beyond every thought and make every day a day to remember.Thanx so much for sharing.


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Joy56 4 years ago

we posted at same time............. have a good day.


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

Joy56 I love that.Talk about perfect timing.I am going to facebook to find u.I have a great idea for a story.

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