That Stranger There (tanka)

What flowers will bloom

In the footsteps left behind

From that stranger there

Whose music caused hearts to dance

Through a dream of what might be


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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

Boy how I love your tankas! I'd reference my favorite line, but look silly repeating the entire tanka! :D Beautiful, nonetheless!


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pstraubie48 3 years ago from sunny Florida

Dreaming of what might .....I have done that a few times.

thank you for sharing your carefully chosen expressive tanka with us.

Angels are winging their way to you this morning. ps


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

"Dreaming is free" as the song goes and when one dreams, one has hope for the future.

Lovely as always.

Voted up ++ and sharing

God bless, Faith Reaper


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kashmir56 3 years ago from Massachusetts

Thanks for sharing this awesome tanka !


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Dreams cantake you to such strange thoughts and sometimes to the most funfilled thoughts


Sueswan 3 years ago

Hi Mhatter

"Whose music caused hearts to dance" Beautiful and joyful.

Voted up +++ and sharing


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AudreyHowitt 3 years ago from California

Beautiful Martin!


lovedoctor926 3 years ago

Dreams are our escape from reality. Beautiful


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Made 3 years ago from Finland

This tanka is like a soft and relaxing thought. So beautiful...


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. Simply dreamy.


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

That was very beautiful.


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wayne barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

Beautiful Sir Martin.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Amen to that.


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shanmarie 2 years ago from Texas

Not be redundant, but that was beautiful.

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