April-National Poetry Month - Poem 3

Poem Three

I’m feeling free

Flying high on a raggedy kite string

Tugging me to poetic heights

An impossibe possibility

*

Praying for a wisp of wind

To lift me

To new levels

Not seen before

*

Maybe I'll see Lillyfly

Mckbird, drbj

Soaring

Coax me gently with a tug

Higher

Exhiliration is mounting

27 and counting



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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

Very cute! And I love that you have mentioned other poets!


Sunnie Day 4 years ago

Very lovely! Such fun..Kite flying was something I loved and still do but cant run like I used too..hehe..I would like to see Mike soaring holding onto a kite...I know he would do it so well..lol He would be looking down going...Hey any one got a pellet gun?

Loved this!

Sunnie


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

nice poem, anna. you are good at these short poems . see you tommorow


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mckbirdbks 4 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

anndavis25 what a nice piece of poetry. Thanks for the mention. I think I'll get a skateboard to get up to speed, to make this kite fly. In the mean time your Soar. Vote Up and across.


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA

Lovely, cute, neat--all those things. Enjoyed reading it. Voted up!


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jhamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

Oh man...27 more to go!...it is exhilirating! Jamie


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Your poem is adorable. Voted up and beautiful, Joyce.


Sueswan 4 years ago

Hi Ann

I am coaxing you gently. Go Ann go!

Voted up and away


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drbj 4 years ago from south Florida

Just don't get too close, Ann, don't want our kite strings to tangle and send us crashing to earth. Sweet poetry and thanks for the mention, m'dear.


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anndavis25 4 years ago from Clearwater, Fl. Author

Audrey, would you like me to enter these poems with another title...Or do you not mind me using your name? Tell me.


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anndavis25 4 years ago from Clearwater, Fl. Author

Kites are fun. I still do it too. When the grandkids are over. I'm not sure I know about Mike. Would like to be filled in. Love, Ann


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anndavis25 4 years ago from Clearwater, Fl. Author

Thanks for the follow cleaner. I'm afraid I have been neglectful of other people's writings lately. Sorry.

Appreciate your comment. Ann


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anndavis25 4 years ago from Clearwater, Fl. Author

mckbird...I'm proud. You speak nice words to me. Thank you. Be sure to wear a helmet if you are brave enough to get out the skateboard, and forget the tricks.

Thank you for the votes AD


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anndavis25 4 years ago from Clearwater, Fl. Author

Victoria, I will try forever to be cute, neat and lovely. lol. Thank you for votes.


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anndavis25 4 years ago from Clearwater, Fl. Author

Oh man is right!! What was I thinking? Thank you for stopping by.


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anndavis25 4 years ago from Clearwater, Fl. Author

Thank you writer. Hope you are well and happy these days. And t/y for the votes. Ann


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anndavis25 4 years ago from Clearwater, Fl. Author

I feel your support, Ms cheerleader. Bet you were one in school. It's fitting since this is about a kite...you voted up and away. You witty one. Thank you


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anndavis25 4 years ago from Clearwater, Fl. Author

I would never bring you down drbj. I will keep my distance and observe your greatness from afar.


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

Hi Ann, I think you should do whatever makes the most sense to you. I have been using just a regular title and then in my tags adding National Poetry Month 2012. That way, it is easier to search


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

Great hub and thanks for sharing.

Take care

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

Great hub and thanks for sharing.

Take care

Eddy.


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anndavis25 4 years ago from Clearwater, Fl. Author

Thanks Eddy. Glad to hear from you. Ann

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