The Back of Her Wings Fall


Colors swept away by storms

Destroying its beautiful forms

Just like a feeling of two spirit

The back of her wings fall

Falling further down into a well

Never knew when will they ever meet again

The sound of splash from her eyes to his hand

Building a river of misery

With sorrow and grief

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writerscentro 4 years ago from India

Destroying its beautiful forms.... wow!! Touchy Poem


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ahorseback 4 years ago

Awesome , mysterious , real.....love it :-}


Derdriu 4 years ago

Chanroth: What deep truths, graphic images and searing emotions can be found in the building and breaking of relationships!

Thank you for sharing, etc.,

Derdriu


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chanroth 4 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi writerscentro, ahourseback and Derdriu, thank you all very much for commenting and reading. @writerscentro, this is a touchy poem. My friend read this and she said..."sensitive read!" Thank you! :)


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

This is so sad chanroth. Beautifully written. Building a river with misery, Profound!!


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chanroth 4 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi Ruby, thank you! :)


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Sad but beautifully said.


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chanroth 4 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi Gypsy, thank you!

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