The Ladybug

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In the coldest winter

What did my eyes see

A ladybug in the shower

Staring at me

She just sat there

Red with black dots

None to spare

I knew lady luck

Had visited with care

Through my sadness

I began to smile

I knew her good fortune

I soon would follow

She became my friend

Little pretty girl

My life changed from then on

She was my gorgeous

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eHealer 3 years ago from Las Vegas

How beautiful Caroline. You have a talent for prose and a gift for cadence in the text. It is really very good, and well done! I love lady bugs, they have my collector's item since childhood.


cleaner3 3 years ago

sweet , cute,.... it is you ! have a great weekend Gorgeous.


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xstatic 3 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

They are always a delight to see, and many try never to harm these little creatures. Glad it made you smile to find it!


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btrbell 3 years ago from Mesa, AZ

Lovely! And perfect. When life goes from moment to moment(s) like these, it makes everything right. What a sweet and heartwarming poem! Thank you for sharing!


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Mhatter99 3 years ago from San Francisco

Sweet poem, thank you. Arlene preferred pearls to diamonds.


Ghaelach 3 years ago

Morning Caroline.

A beautiful poem.

Nature has some wonderful creatures.

LOL Ghaelach


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Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

what a cute little poem..:)


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

I love ladybugs, thet are so cute. I'm glad she found you...


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

A dear little poem. Nature can be so uplifting.


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Pearldiver 3 years ago from Tomorrow - In Words & NZ Time.

Be sure to send her home again when your days get warmer... she has many others to visit in the course of one lifetime and within the needs of good fortune... lovely sentiment Caroline and one I'm sure would be shared by even striped pearls... thank you for sharing her..


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shiningirisheyes 3 years ago from Upstate, New York

Such a wonderful pick me up for a sad moment. I hold these little creatures in special places of my heart as well and consider them a personal piece of luck when they appear.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. I love ladybugs. Just the other day it was raining and cold and there in my room upon a plant the ladybug sat. Loved this.


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Minnetonka Twin 3 years ago from Minnesota

AWW-this made me smile-a lady bug friend-so sweet :-)


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

What a perfect gem of poetry and wonderful writing. The ladybug brought you luck, and it is such a sweet sentiment. Just lovely. Your poems and writing always touch the soul, Caroline.


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Vellur 3 years ago from Dubai

Simply beautiful. Enjoyed reading. A great poem. Voted up and shared.


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actionbronson 3 years ago

Awesome poem. Very simple yet sound. Lady bugs are usually very beneficially to a garden and look pretty cool. Voted up


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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

I love your lady bug.. so cute and such a lovely poem Caroline..

blessing

and Merry Christmas

sharing

Debbie


Poetic Fool 3 years ago

So charming and uplifting too! Fortune smiles on us in the most unexpected ways and places. Beautiful piece, Caroline!


Sueswan 3 years ago

Hi Caroline,

Beautiful, delightful and inspirational.

Take care :)


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LadyFiddler 3 years ago from Somewhere in the West

This was cool ;)

Very nice


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GusTheRedneck 3 years ago from USA

Howdy Caroline (carolinemd21) -

It was fun to read about so lucky a bug, the bringer of such good fortune. Thanks for reminding us to keep our eyes and our minds both wide open.

Gus :-)))


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carolinemd21 3 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Hi EHealer thanks so much for the kind words and sentiment. :)

Hi Michael thanks so much for reading. Have a great weekend! :)

Hi XStatic thanks so much for stopping by. :)

Hi Btrbell thank you for reading and commenting! :)

Hi Mhatter thank you for reading. Arlene is a wise woman. :)

Hi Ghaelach yes nature does. Thank you for stopping by. :)

Hi Frank thank you! :)

Hi Ruby thank you for your kind words my friend. :)

Hi Blossom yes it can. Thanks for the visit. :)

Hi Pearldiver thank you for stopping by! This happened a few years ago and she did go home safely. :)

Hi Shining thanks for your always uplifting comments. :)

Hi Gypsy thank you dear friend for your kind words. :)

Hi Minnetonka thank you for reading. :)

Hi Astra thanks so much for the kind comment. Your poems touch the soul as well. :)

Hi Vellur thanks so much for the comment and share. :)

Hi Action thanks a lot for reading and the comment. :)

Hi Debbie thanks so much dear lady. Merry Christmas to you too! :)

Hi Poetic thanks so much for the kind words. :)

Hi Sueswan thanks so much for stopping by dear friend. :)

Hi Lady thanks for stopping by. :)

Hi Gus thanks a lot for stopping by. :)

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