The Paradox

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Spinning

Whirling

Twirling

Down

The paradox

Lies within

Breaking me down

Two truths

Become one

Slowing my mind

With thoughts

Left uncombined

I wait

I wonder

For my thoughts

To die down

To slumber

What is reality

Can it be seen

Shining through

The moon and the stars

Cannot lead me to peace

The sun's full force

It's rays fiery fierce

Giving me power

That I've never seen

Where truth and lies

Play in between


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CloudExplorer 4 years ago from New York City

I love paradoxes and this poem exemplifies that of what a paradox truly is, which is a sort of twisted view on things. perplexing it may be but reality can steer many of us in such directions at times, leaving people only to question.

Awesome creativity, thanks for sharing your writing talent, and I may need to follow you now to see many more of your creative hubs you may have to offer. Voted up and getting pinned as well to my '2012 Poetry' board on Pinterest. Beautiful image as well.


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Caroline, hello gorgeous, this is the bomb girl. once again you have fired your weapon and hit the bullseye, you straight shooter, you. Love Michael.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome! Flowed like a river and lovely words.Love where truth and lies play in between.


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

How sweet ! Where truth and lies play in between. There is plenty far down and they won't get lost . I know . I had to change quite a lot here ,but they are not lost they are yours they are the reason you write , they are You!

Stay well , have a great day , Bless!


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SubRon7 4 years ago from eastern North Dakota

And again, Caroline, your artwork so fits your words. That was kind of a shocker to see at first, though.


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savanahl 4 years ago

What a beautiful poem. I love the way it flows like a mind racing with thoughts. Voting up and awesome.


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Teylina 4 years ago

Beautiful in a strange way, but definitely inviting as 2d read! And awesome in its use of phrases! Thanks for writing.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Voted up and awesome..Enjoyed..


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picadilly 4 years ago from Schaumburg, IL

Caroline beautifully executed..I loved the flow, the words, the art!!! Amazing!


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tom hellert 4 years ago from home

c21,

I dunno-i just dunno what I think- what does it all mean ... what does the picture mean... why only 1 or 2 words per line sure it makes it easier to read- points on that but I kinda like that short n sweet well done- I think - yea good job im with ya ..I think...

LL&P-

TH


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ Thank you so much Cloud it's an honor to be pinned! Thanks for stopping by!

@ Thanks Michael

@ Sky thank you for your kind words always. Bless.

@ Jim LOL thank you glad you liked.

@ Savanah thank you for your support. You are awesome.

@ Teylina glad to see you around lately. Thank you for commenting. :)

@ Ruby thank you very much!

@ Picadily thank you!

@ Tom LOL Umm... it means whatever you want it to mean. Take Care!


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epigramman 4 years ago

...well I think that paradox lays in everyone's mind Caroline - but you always have the poetic gusto and innovation to make your readers feel and think - and thanks for dropping by - don't forget to read my saucy, frisky, naughty, sassy stuff too if you're in the mood - lol - and the invite still stands at my FB group Let's just talk music or cinema - hope all is well with you - sending you warm wishes from a full moon over lake erie time 9:02pm


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tom hellert 4 years ago from home

C21,

then I shall have it mean that a healthy diet is important but man/woman cannot live on bread alone...

TH


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

great poem you have here Caroline...love the portrayal of Paradox here...


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ Hi Epi yes I love your sassy and naughty stuff! I always love to go to your page! I will check out the FB page too. Have a great day.

@ Tom LOL well, that's ok with me.

@ Thanks you Raciniwa!

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