The Riddle of Me

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I am unsure
about my deal.
Am i fantasy
or real?
An illusion,
a mirage
or am I but
an art collage?
Am I surreal
and do not know,
or am I just
reflective show?
Who I am,
I must confess...
is not clear.
I can only guess.
I have a sense
of the divine
in this misty
head of mine.
It is enough
today to be
who I find
myself to be.
evolving,
I'm a mystery...
a riddle so sublime.

No_Clue

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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

No_clue is apt for this one!

I like it!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

So it is, WillStarr, so it is! Thanks for your loyalty and ever encouraging comments!


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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

You are both real and sublime, it's the world that is surreal..

It is such a pleasure to experience your poetry, and this one, since I'm a lifelong artist, paints a picture for me, especially...

And from this misty headed person, as well, thank you my dear friend.


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

You are a gem, bbnix! Thank you!


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vietnamvet68 5 years ago from New York State

I'm a mystery, a riddle so sublime. I like this.

God Bless


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Denise Handlon 5 years ago from North Carolina

Yes to all of it and more. The mystery and the Divine. Beautiful. Glad I hopped and found you.


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epigramman 5 years ago

..please lead me onto ...your promised poetic land - and there is no other alter ego here who rocks my world - as much as you!!!!!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Denise, thank you, thank you, and I will hop on over to your site and check out your work!

epigramman, you are my poetic heart-throb! any poet's dream!


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Spirit Whisperer 5 years ago from Isle of Man

How do you explain the colour green to a blind man who has never seen the colour? I love the way you try in this poem.

Thank you.


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Elizabeth99 5 years ago from Milwaukee, WI

Very nice and mysterious. :)


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Spirit Whisperer, Can anyone truly capture the essense of the color green and convey it is it truly is, in all its hues and tones, to a blind man? I wonder...one can only try, right? Been told God loves a try-er...smile...I sure hope so!!! Thank you and you are welcome! Love and light!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Elizabeth, thank you...I so appreciate your visit!


janbee 5 years ago

No_Clue....you are Very Real! A wonderful person with a Divine sense of self! Hugs to you,my friend!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

janbee, you are a good friend, indeed!


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Fossillady 5 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

a life unexamined is not worth living, i think that's a quote from Einstein, anyway it fits! Looooved your poem!

We create who we are!!!


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justom 5 years ago from 41042

Another good one, I can't keep up with you :-P Peace!! Tom


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

justom, I am having some trouble with that, myself! Thanks! and Peace to you, as well!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Fossillady, I think Einstein was very right! I am just learning that we create who we are...I'm a late bloomer but...a bloomer, nonetheless! That in itself was a revelation! I love your comments! You are an awesome gal!


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Wayne Brown 5 years ago from Texas

What a great signature piece for your writing moniker...No_Clue! I loved it. Nice work! WB


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Smiles...thanks Wayne! This one was a fun write!


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Docmo 5 years ago from UK

Very good- very mysterious and deep. Love it!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Docmo, I am quite happy, thank you, Sir!


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Umna Safdar 5 years ago

I too have got some similar thoughts...liked the poem.. :)


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Thank you, Umna! I appreciate your visit and comment!


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Oh, my God. The style is amazing, so perfect and smooth flow! I love the expressions, it's so intriguing =)


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No_Clue 4 years ago Author

Ahhh, thank you, Max, that is quite a compliment, indeed! I am thrilled!

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