The Unattainable


Reckless desire

The unattainable

Being lost in a land

Of the unknown



For mysteries to unfold



Driven passion

Lost at hand

Being led into

Unearthly lands

Not knowing

Where you stand


Into the forbidden

Endless plains

In desert sand

Where gods and godesses

Lay close at hand

Hidden pathways

Which you cannot return

Playing at your life's chords

Streaming the sum

That which you wish for

Coming to you

In many rings

That strum like an instrument

At your heart's strings

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Princess Prisca 4 years ago from Heaven living on Earth


I love it!!!!

Great Job!


Ciao...Princess Prisca

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iamaudraleigh 4 years ago

Your hub is so beautiful! I can relate too it. Voted up!

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Senoritaa 4 years ago

Absolutely brilliant as usual. Nice work Caroline!

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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

Many miles to go Dear Caroline Many miles to go , this is where you put your trust , in the warmth of your poetry , and they will turn and give you guidance and strength , many miles to go . Beautiful work.

Be well Bless.

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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Pull my heartstrings, my lovely, but be gentle , don't break them. Love it gorgeous. !!!

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cherylone 4 years ago from Connecticut

This is beautiful. I loved it! voted up

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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome! Just wonderful words.

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KatrineDalMonte 4 years ago

Caroline, it's a beautiful poem, very sweet, somewhat magical. Voted up. :-)

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SubRon7 4 years ago from eastern North Dakota

Your artwork or someone else's, Caroline, it's still beautiful to go along with your moving and mystical words.

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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful, The picture is perfect...Smiles..

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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

Wow this is so awesome - I loved it!

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The Frog Prince 4 years ago from Arlington, TX

Excellent work once again.


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tom hellert 4 years ago from home

c21- it just reminds me of Montan...dont know why...


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ Princess thank you for stopping by!

@ Iamaudra thank you!

@ Senoritta thanks for your support!

@ Sky thank you for your kind words.

@ Cleaner thank you

@ Cheryl thank you for stopping by

@ Gypsy thank you!

@ Katrine thank you for stopping by :)

@ Thank you Jim!

@ Ruby thank you for always taking time out to comment.

@ Acaetnna thank you!

@ Frog Prince thank you for showing up and commenting. :)

@ Tom where's Montan?

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tom hellert 4 years ago from home


MontanA- stupid fingers of mine...

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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu seems a great lyrics for a song...

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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Tom why Montana?

Raciniwa thank you dear lady!

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tom hellert 4 years ago from home


i like the mountains wide open spaces ive never been there theres alot of petroleum/environmental jobs up there thts what I used to do those kinda jobs at one time as well.


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