The Woman On The Mountaintop ( a challenge by billybuc).

This is my first challenge here on HubPages but it certainly will not be my last.

The Woman On The Mountaintop. (Acrostic).

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Through tears and sorrow

healing winds

explosion of minds.

x

Wondrous world

on infantile paths

misted senses

a journey to share

never-ending faith.

x

Onwards and upwards

ne'er to surrender.

x

Tempestuous storms

heart tugging emotions

escalating strengths.

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Maturity thrives

omens so clear

understanding , reassurance

nearer to her dream

touching legacies

as a new day beckons

instilling new strengths

notions unwinding

telling her story

of how she stands tall

preciously proud.


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I hope you enjoyed and a great big thank you to billybuc for setting this challenge.

Lots of love from my little corner of Wales.

Eddy.

© 2014 Eiddwen

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Harishprasad 2 years ago from India

Exquisite and superb ! Eiddwen, I haven't ever seen such an acrostic poem , so blissfully written. No doubt, an excellent and soulful poem, and a great response to Bill's challenge. Voted up and shared.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Oh thank you Harishprasad your words mean a lot. Do you know I was very nervous creating this hub because I have read so many others on this challenge; some wonderful stories as well as poems and I didn't think this compared to them in quality at all.

However I am now looking forward to the next challenge .

Thank you again my friend and enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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DDE 2 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Beautiful! Talent shines through your wonderful hubs. Voted up!


Ghaelach 2 years ago

A beautifully written poem to Bill's challenge Eddy.

You have a wonderful knack of finding photo's and music that go so well with your hubs.

We seem to have a similar taste in music.

Have a nice weekend Eddy.

Ghaelach


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Oh thank you Devika so glad you enjoyed and here's to so many more hubs for us both to share on here.

Eddy


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

I am so glad you also enjoyed Ghaelach ; as I said I was quite nervous about publishing this one. Thank you again and wishing you and yours a wonderful day ahead.

Lots of love from Wales.

Eddy.


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Ericdierker 2 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

Another beautiful beginning to my day. Thank you. Of course you rose splendidly to Bill's challenge and I look forward to the next to see how you honor it.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

I am so glad you enjoyed Eric and here's to so many more challenges.

Wishing you a great day my friend.

Eddy.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

Wonderful acrostic poem Eddy, you are so good at these. Well done, voted up.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you John your comment is greatly appreciated. Wishing you a wonderful day.

Eddy.


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RachaelOhalloran 2 years ago from United States

Eddy. you are far braver than I in taking up challenges on HP. I don't perform well to them, whereas you took the challenge by the horns and created a wonderful acrostic. At the same time, you are introducing your new readers to a different style of poetry accompanied by wonderful imagery. Very well done. Voted up and awesome.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Your words are so greatly appreciated Rachael and I think that from now on I will enjoy taking up many more challenges. Wishing you a wonderful day.

Eddy.


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida

Eddy, this is a beautiful response to Bill's challenge. You're such a wonderful poet with a spirit as free as that of the woman on the mountaintop.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

I am so glad you enjoyed this one Sha and here's to wishing you a great day ahead. Lots of love from Wales.

Eddy.


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Jackie Lynnley 2 years ago from The Beautiful South

Beautiful poetry and love your pictures. Looks like Rolly on that last rock! (assuming you know him). ^+


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billybuc 2 years ago from Olympia, WA

Blown away I am....this is you at your best, and you saved it all for my little challenge. Thank you so much, Eddy, for taking part in your first challenge and making mine the one you chose. Seriously, I'm blown away by this lovely work.

billy


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

You wrote a perfect acrostic poem for this challenge! I loved her strength and the last picture envisioned her at the pinnacle of life. Loved it and sharing on Twitter...


christinemariezzz 2 years ago

Eddy,

I am glad you took the challenge, and to create an acrostic!

I like when another Hubber calls our attention to do something; Maybe you could pose a challenge too!

Christine


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Thelma Alberts 2 years ago from Germany

Wow Eddy! This is a beautiful challenge. Thevideo is awesome as well as the photos. Thanks for sharing.


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Mel Carriere 2 years ago from San Diego California

Lovely poem. I hope you have a lovely day there in your little corner of Wales, where I think my curly hair comes from.


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breakfastpop 2 years ago

You are amazing! Up, beautiful and awesome!


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ocfireflies 2 years ago from North Carolina

Beautiful!


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dilipchandra12 2 years ago from India

So nice pics selected again. Well written my friend, enjoyed every word. Good work, voted UP...


suzettenaples 2 years ago

Beautiful acrostic poem. You said so much about tranquility and inner strength of the woman on the mountaintop .I really enjoyed reading this.


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jhamann 2 years ago from Reno NV

I love the "p" sound in the last line. Well played! Beautifully written Eddy! There is nothing as good as a well planned acrostic poem. I am happy you are feeling better and I am excited to catch up! Jamie


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Thanks Jackie and yes maybe there is a resemblance to Rolly lol hadn't noticed that till you said. Have a wonderful day.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Oh Billy what a wonderful comment from you ; it means so much and here's to so many more challenges.

Wishing you and Bev a wonderful weekend.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much Ruby and so glad you enjoyed.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Hi Christinemariezzz thanks for a great comment and yes mmm you have given me something to think about now.

Enjoy your day .

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

You are so very welcome Thelma and wishing you a great day too.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Thanks Mel your comment so appreciated and do you have Welsh heritage?

Here's to many more hubs for us both to share on here.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Oh breakfastpop what a wonderful comment. Lots of love coming your way from my little corner of Wales.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so very much Kim and wishing you a great day.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

As always thank you so very much Dilip.

Have a wonderful weekend.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you Suzette for taking the time to stop by and leave a wonderful comment. Lots of love from Wales.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Your comment Jamie so greatly appreciated. Here's to so many more hubs for us both to share on here. Enjoy your weekend too.

Eddy.


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kevin murphy-87 2 years ago from Ireland

How do you do it? haha This is amazing!!! :)


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ologsinquito 2 years ago from USA

It looks as if a lot of people have risen to this challenge. Good for you!


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Nell Rose 2 years ago from England

Beautiful Eddy! and what a great addition to the challenge!


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much Kevin and wishing you a great weekend from over here in Wales.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Your comment greatly appreciated ologsinquito.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you Nell.

Eddy.


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Vellur 2 years ago from Dubai

Loved your interpretation of the photo, a lovely response to Bill Holland's challenge.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much Vellur.

Eddy.


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D.A.L. 2 years ago from Lancashire north west England

Eddy,

Lovely ,descriptive and beautiful prose enhanced by your chosen images. what more can I say other than you have met the challenge and past with flying colours, and the accolades above are well deserved. voted up , beautiful and interesting.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Your comments are always so greatly appreciated DAL and here's wishing you a great weekend.

Eddy.


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Faith Reaper 2 years ago from southern USA

Wow, Eddy, what a dramatic acrostic poem and you have surpassed Bill's challenge here! Great work!

Up ++++ tweeting, pinning, G+ and sharing

Blessings


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tobusiness 2 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Eddy, I seem to to be using this word for all your poems but this is truly "exquisite." Also loved the images you've chosen.


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SAQIB6608 2 years ago from HYDERABAD PAKISTAN

great. I sort of enjoyed this stuff.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you Faith and enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Your comment so appreciated tobu.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you SAQIB6608 and wishing you a great day.

eddy.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. Wonderful and inspirational. Enjoyed. Passing this on.


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annart 2 years ago from SW England

Lovely ideas and beautiful expression, Eddy. A great response to the challenge!

Ann


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Shyron E Shenko 2 years ago

Eddy, I know you did BillyBuc proud. I have not had a chance to answer his challenge yet, my computer keeps going down.

This is beautiful and I voted that way also voted up, USI and shared.

Love the picture of the man standing on half of the praying hands.

Blessings my dear friend

Shyron


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much Rasma.

eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Your comment so appreciated Ann.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

S glad you enjoyed Shyron and here's wishing you a wonderful day to come.

Eddy.


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shanmarie 2 years ago from Texas

Awesome response, Eddy, but still all your own!


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much shanmarie and wishing you a great day.

Eddy.


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Suhail and my dog 2 years ago from Mississauga, ON

How did I miss this beautiful piece of poetry in your characteristic style? Very nice indeed. Loved your way of writing it :-)


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much Suhail.

Enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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Genna East 2 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

Oh Eddy, you have given such character and dimension to Billy’s challenge. Your unique poetry fills the senses with beauty, inspiration and hope. Thank you. :-)


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much Genna.

Eddy.


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The Examiner-1 23 months ago

For your first time I thought that you did good Eiddwen. I am just starting on my second one. This was graceful yet daring and it had various paths yet only one way to the top. Very good. I voted up, shared and pinned it.

Kevin


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tillsontitan 23 months ago from New York

"nearer to her dream..." This whole poem seems to fit those words. Beautifully done Eddy!

Voted up, awesome, beautiful, and interesting.


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Eiddwen 23 months ago from Wales Author

Thank you Kevin and Mary.

Eddy.


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Rachel L Alba 19 months ago from Every Day Cooking and Baking

Hi Eiddwen, What a touching poem you wrote. I watched the video and I think if you are don't shed tears watching that, then you don't have a heart. So beautiful both are, I voted up, beautiful and awesome.

Thanks for sharing.

Blessings to you.


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NiaLee 16 months ago from BIG APPLE

So special, so speaking to the soul, so raw, so strong…that women on top of the mouton feels like someone I know.

Edy, thank you again and again to reach all the way in there and bring out light, love, strength.

Love to you and all.

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