The House (poem)

Each night the sounds of Joy would fill the air

From house whose warmth filled neighborhood with pride

So great a love was living there inside

That every satin dream would start from there

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Though music’s laughter traveled far and wide

So sweet the sound it filled each heart with care

Each dance of love the neighbors gladly share

Each night’s delight the starry eyed applied

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Yet all the while none knew who called house home

They searched but got no answer to their calls

They claimed access but nothing did they find

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Amiss has set a riddle loose to roam

But there within the stillness of the walls

Where memories two lovers left behind

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lovebuglena 4 years ago from Staten Island, NY

Beautiful and heartfelt poem. Thank you for sharing.


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wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

Very pretty poem.


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

Mysterious love poem and it was beautiful including the music.


Janhorner 4 years ago

This poem has ghostly trends, and I found it simply wonderful. Voted up,

Jan


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shara63 4 years ago from Delhi

beautiful whisper of love !


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lrc7815 4 years ago from Central Virginia

Imagination could run wild with this one. It leaves the mind wandering. Beautiful.


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MelChi 4 years ago from Cape Town, South Africa

Mysterious and makes you wonder more about the house...great poem! :)


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

If only walls could talk, beautiful with a touch of the mysterious. A Wonderful read.

Mhatter, you've done it again.


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

This is fantastic. It leaves you to wonder where the people are, ujnless they went somewhere where only they could be...


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful. If only walls could talk, wait a minute, maybe not!


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rcrumple 4 years ago from Kentucky

Could ghosts of lovers still reside

within the home and walls inside

could times so golden still presume

to fill the air of every room

these questions have no answers now

but to all past love we sincerely bow.

Great job, my friend!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

A ghostly romantic poem. I think there are houses that ghostly lovers really do call home.


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Such a descriptive and haunting rendition that keeps the reading guessing.


Sueswan 4 years ago

Hauntingly beautiful

Voted up and away

Have a great day. :)

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