The Picnic (tanka)

It was time to go

So they packed up their picnic

And headed back home

But they left something behind

To flower from that moment


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whonunuwho 6 months ago from United States

Nicely done my friend. whonu


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bravewarrior 5 months ago from Central Florida

What a wonderful way to build memories!

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