The Stream (tanka)

Peaceful was the night

When the lovers found the stream

Wonder of the stars

Carrying soft crystal tears

Off to eternal ocean

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RobinGrosswirth23 18 months ago from New York

The wonder of the stars

crystal tears

great poetic justice and imagery


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bravewarrior 18 months ago from Central Florida

I can see the tears floating down the stream. Salty tears filling up the salty ocean. Beautiful!

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The Examiner-1 18 months ago

Did they their tears drip into the water as they were washed out to the ocean? Whatever, it was beautiful and interesting. I voted up, shared and pinned it.


Lee Cloak 18 months ago

A charming piece, beautifully crafted, thanks for sharing these wonderful words, voted up, Lee

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