Poem: There you go my child!

There you go my child!


Ready to find the reason

for which you are

here with us now

Live and direct

in this new form flesh .

After so much time

Had already passed

There you go my child

you are already crying

your own childish methods

I understand that

it’s your own little way

Trying to see

just how much

You parents care.

There you go my child

Asking no questions

Doing the very best

life had thought you

instinctively piercing

into your parents eyes

observing only

their every reactions

There you go my child

Always needing

to learn more than

any parent Is capable

of teaching you

However you must

grow up to give them

an “A” for the effort

that I have seen

so many children

somehow run right by

and miserably missed

Most parents have

tried mighty hard

They gave you all

that they had

in an desparate dash

trying to reach you

Just reach you.

There are some great

parents and some

that are not so great

some children are

simply quite heavy

some inexperienced

parents could not

carry that weight

There you go my child


The day will come

and these same lessons

will help you through

these are the life stories

that the great parents

made it their duty

to pass then on to you

Sometimes a parent

only hope, is to try

No one prepared them

for those half million

times for the night

that you stayed up

when all you did was cry!

Sometimes they refused

to listen their own

sweet loving parents.

Children are unique

there is only of each

Every parents hopes

That theirs is the best

There you go my child

I can only say to you

that It had to be God

I vow to grow you up

So you can see why

His only son Jesus

who said suffer the

little children so that

They will come unto me!

I promise you will know!

Who that Most High God.

sincerely and truly is!



There you go my child!

Bless:

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Comments 17 comments

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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

It's my pleasure bluebird and I thank you. The joy of sharing truly comes in the words of appreciation sent back in these comments , that are sincere and true.

Give God the praise.

Do have a wonderful day!

Bless.


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bluebird 4 years ago

I appreciate your presence very much here on hubpages. You add a new dimension that has been missing and for which I also seek.

All God's children have so much to learn! And they will learn, oh yes, they will. It is coming.

Thanks for your poem!


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

I have just given you my heartfelt and sincere and well meant thanks .

They need all the help , I am who I am never professed to be an English major so where is the beef? But what I am seeing quite clearly is people that are addicted , base on the feelings they recieve after trying to belittle someone, that cannot happen with me , at thgis age only God has that capability. And I know so, my intent is not to look good by making others look bad , that's for kids with jealousy.

Here is the big joke , if something , your coffee , food , service , you refuse it. You don't ever indulge in that which is not good for you so it's an addiction. I am dying to read the answer you will receive if any, same as yesterday . These are possible kids , who had their own way growing up or else they would have learned respect.

I am the one to use these that I write later English and misspell , just stay clear that ain't going discourage me from what I am doing .

I left school a long time ago , and my first lesson was respect.

I already gave you the seal of approval, there are no limits. If you as others have given , say to me sky look at this am gone to see.

Bless.


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poetvix 4 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

I just read some of the new additions to your forum thread. It seems you have an ongoing debate with Randy. I'm sorry if I have overstepped my bounds, but I had to chime in. God bless and keep you.


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

It just shows that there are these little cliques here , I did a little research, and you will be surprised at the operating schemes.

But let it be known that given the age of Jesus when he died and for what, as long as I remain where I started with that question , and they want me in school that requires surrender in defeat how could this ever happen ?

There are those here who denounce that e Most High God exist, that is never going to happen. Forget the english God understands all .

Stay strong my sister.

Blessings , spiritual wickedness in high places.


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poetvix 4 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

In regards to the forum, I just answered there. Boy, you have stirred the pot with that one. Good for you!


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

That's what I believe the Mosh High sent us out for , but it was mentioned like sheep among wolves . Al Pacino movie still rattles.

What I want you to look at for one second, it the opposite of your truthful statement above , because that's what have yielded the most individual and lasting success in all of life , peoples ability. I will never ask you to ever choose sides , but your opinion matters to me. Look at my thread on the forum, only from my question , tell me what you understand only the question. We will honestly discuss the balance afterwards.

Blessings and thanks.

Are some people truly dumb, or we not wise enough to understand them?

Bless.


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poetvix 4 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

I would be happy to look at whatever you wish. You have a unique style that speaks the message to a wide audience. I like that. It's not learned, it's innate and therefore more pure. God bless.


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Thank you sincerely poetvix. And this is why, when I say that I understand the being that is man, I will always take the 15-20 solid ones that I know is God fearing, than the numbers where jealousy and the evils that man possesses have a greater chance, of having sincere people. When those people smile I smile , I see no hypocritical actions and no envy , no double standards and no hate.

So I thank you truly not for commenting but for being yourself at all times .

I am real happy that you like this one and think so highly of it, but it's my pleasure to now that you read and know understand what you read.

And I know if I am off badly you will say sky what happened , and If I cannot explain I will properly, I will remove it, just because of the character you have built on here.

Tomorrow I will ask you to look at something for me.

Thanks for everything and God bless.


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poetvix 4 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

I think this is the best I have read from you yet. It's, layered and complex, relating the parent child relationship and the relationship between God and his children. You are growing by leaps and bounds as a poet. God love you! For me, your message always comes first and this one rocks, but the flow here is mightily impressive too.


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Only to hear those words coming from your heart , is sufficient for me to know the truth in this life cannot hide .

Rose it is with sincere feelings I can say that which you already know . Put the Most High God first in everything and everything is going to be alright.

Your comments are greatly appreciated.

Bless.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful! Children are the ones I truly believe are especially looked after by the Lord because they are the most vulnerable. It's probably the most frightening experience coming into this world not knowing where and who you are. Then meeting the people responsible for your first steps in this world - your parents. How lucky are the children who have wonderful and loving parents and my heart goes out to those who don't. So I pray and rely on the Lord to guide them and keep them safe always.


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Don't ever forget that we are all some body's child, and our parents are also somebody's children.

Who want's to go back conveniently stop at an ape , to each his own , but I beseech them in the name of The Most High, to look again, only this time from the inside .

Thanks brethren Frank .

Bless.


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

I like how you use the metaphors.. children are heavy and parents cannot carry the weight.. It is clear that parents lead and children should hope to follow so they too can learn to lead.. yeah up and awesome my friend :)


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Thank you very much Jo-Goldsmith. It is quite a pleasure that feeling comes over you and regardless of what you may have to do , they all just simply have to wait , because some thing greater is at work . So I do believe you when you say you that you had to be here . I always say there are no accident when we take hold of our lives through a sound spiritual belief.

Again I thank you for your acts of kindness and you are quite welcome. Looking forward to visiting sometime soon.

Give Thanks .

Bless.


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Jo_Goldsmith11 4 years ago

This is just beautiful! I thank you so much for sharing this blessing of a poem. I thank our Yeshua for making sure I was led here. I voted up and shared on facebook!

Shalom! :)


KatrineDalMonte 4 years ago

I like it very much :-)

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