This Minute (poem)

Face this minute

Shaking shaking

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What are you afraid of

We’ve been through this before

Staking staking

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Every time you face a challenge

Confronting new things odd and different

Something in us stays the moment

Breaking breaking

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Such strange thoughts you fear

Running through our imagination

Creating an unknown world

Which we must flee from

Aching aching

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But who are you to judge

The path that has brought us here

And molded this fine fellow

With whom we now must deal with

Strolling streets familiar

Faking faking

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Turn around and see

This person once called we

Who helped to fashion he

Someone to shame

Someone to blame

Someone our specter is

Raking raking

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Facing this minute

All that remains

Shaking shaking

Music only

Comments 8 comments

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Faith Reaper 2 years ago from southern USA

Wow, this one is really interesting, Mh!

Up and more and sharing

Have a great day,

Faith Reaper


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THarman7 2 years ago from Lacey Washington

Very nice! Thanks for sharing.


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billybuc 2 years ago from Olympia, WA

Different for sure but well-written.


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kidscrafts 2 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

Very interesting poem, Mhatter!


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vkwok 2 years ago from Hawaii

This is very interesting. Lol on the Tenth Doctor Who pic.


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grand old lady 2 years ago from Philippines

I remember reading your earlier poems and when I compare them to how you have been writing lately, I really feel you've developed a fine style as a poet. I love the use of simple words that describe feelings and emotions that are so deeply felt. The contrast adds to the impact of the emotion.


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Nadine May 2 years ago from Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

Very different. Who is observing who?


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teaches12345 2 years ago

I enjoyed this poem. It is different and very inspiring.

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