How innocent we were then ..

It was one of those bad days

when things were not going right,

My sister hid my toy,

and we both had fight.


My father heard me cry,

Very soon he came near,

I told him what had happened,

He listened and said “ Oh dear! ”


He hugged me and kissed me,

And then kissed my sister too,

Then he chased us playfully,

Said ‘Come on you two!’


We ran upstairs and downstairs,

That was some fun,

Our breakfast was ready,

We were called by Mum.


As we sat for breakfast

My sister returned the toy,

I smiled and kissed her

like a good little boy.


Again we became friends,

I had smile on my face.

How innocent we were then,

How lovely were those days !

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Jo_Goldsmith11 5 years ago

Really neat poem. I can remember the fond memories of those days. I really enjoyed this work. If I may, I would like to respectfully give you an idea. Maybe if you changed your line " like a little good boy" to "like a good little boy". This may sound better to you. Bravo!~nice thoughts. :-)


Poetic Fool 5 years ago

This brought back such fond remembrances of such days with my brothers. Thanks for the memories.


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CARTER32071 5 years ago

Thanks for sharing, great hub. What a sweet brother you are.I wish my brother was as sweet as you. He would say sorry in front of my parents, and then he put his mean face back on and started all over again. LOL. Thanks for the the flashback.

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Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India Author

@ Jo_Goldsmith11 - Many thanks for your comment and I am so glad that you have liked the poem. I am grateful for giving me an idea to change the line from "like a little good boy" to "like a good little boy" and this change I have incorporated. Yes now it sounds a lot better and more appropriate. I shall certainly like to have your suggestions/recommendations in future too. Thank you once again.

Best Wishes to you,

Kamalesh


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Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India Author

@Poetic Fool - Thank you for your kind comment.

Best Wishes,

Kamalesh


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Jo_Goldsmith11 5 years ago

Kamalesh050..right on! I am so glad that I did not offend you. I will try to do my best when offering an idea. I really enjoyed this! Take care..


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Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India Author

Oh no, you haven't offended me at all my dear, on the contrary you have helped me a lot in offering the idea. I was so happy to receive your suggestion that I took the liberty in sending you a mail too to covey my special thanks, hope you received the same. Do please try your best to offer your ideas as and when you feel necessary. I shall always appreciate your ideas/ suggestions, so please don't hesitate.

Best Wishes to you,

Kamalesh


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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

Hi Kamalesh050 those days sound like bliss....


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Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India Author

@CARTER32071 -Thank you ever so much for your sweet and encouraging comment. It made me laugh to hear what you wrote when recalling your past, you have great sense of humor ! Well those were sweet days, weren't they ? At times I also had behaved the way your brother did, believe me it is true.. ha ha.

Best wishes to you,

Kamalesh


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Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India Author

@Movie Master - Nice to hear from you again. Thank you so much. Yes you are right, those days were really like bliss and I miss them a lot ! They seem to have flown past rather too quickly !!

Best Wishes,

Kamalesh


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marcoujor 5 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

Kamalesh050--

Very tender and sentimental... voted UP & AB.

Hope all is well with you, mar.


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Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India Author

Thank you for your sweet words. You are always so kind. Trust you are well. I am fine, thank you.

May God be with you. Best Wishes,

Kamalesh


Multiman 5 years ago

Good poem, lots of emmotion hidden and open, I enjoyed it a lot, and voted it up!


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Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India Author

Thank you Multiman for your kind and sweet words. I am so glad that you have liked the poem.

Best Wishes,

Kamalesh


Angela 5 years ago

Beautiful ... Beautiful , I enjoyed the poem so much my dear. Keep up your good work. God Bless.


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Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India Author

I feel great, thank you for your kind words.

Best Wishes,

Kamalesh


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Chris Crow 5 years ago

This is a very nice, sweet poem. I enjoyed reading it.


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Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India Author

Hi Chris, Thank you ever so much for your kind words of encouragement. Glad that you enjoyed the poem.

Hope things are all well with you.

Best Wishes to you,

Kamalesh


Pritam 4 years ago

Beautiful poem that took me back to those sweet old days. Well done.


deb287128 17 months ago from Hooghly

Very sweet and beautiful.


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Kamalesh050 17 months ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India Author

So glad to have your visit and comment.

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