Time’s Door Closed (tanka)

Where did the time go

Cried a mother to her son

Grown and leaving home

Then echoed as the door closed

She had better things to do


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CrisSp 13 months ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

Exactly my sentiments. This tanka is so me and so, it's going into my pinterest board.


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Surabhi Kaura 13 months ago from Toronto, Canada

beautifully written..


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Gypsy Rose Lee 13 months ago from Riga, Latvia

Those are the most painful moments always.

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