To Ask Why

Beautiful pretty caring giving sweet sweetie!

Graceful understanding dearest misunderstood dear!

Honey waiting cute cutie awaiting Hon thoughtful darling thoughtless!

Doll peach honest honesty honestly deceitful something someone dare somewhere!

Nothing babbling nonsense gratefully lucky blessed luckily lovely loving lover!

Breaking sinking broken piece taped glued saved erased!

Lonely loner sad depressed depressing dead death doing don’t please

Do why you who spite wind light rain pray prayed prayers played!

Past passed passive posed fake faking possessive faithful fun paradox!

Say said forgotten gone goodbye hello missed missing memory alive!

 

Comments 19 comments

Sapphire Fisher 6 years ago

very good when this is all over you need to publish your poetry David I think you can make a career outta it!


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Michael Shane 6 years ago from Gadsden, Alabama

Wonderful read!


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Sunshiney31 6 years ago

This is great I love it and I agree with comment number 1 you need to get this stuff published...bravo really great stuff..


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Thank You So Much

For Your Support Guy's!

Wouldnt Have The Slightest

Clue Where To Start Though.

These Are Only A Few Of The Finished.


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pinkhawk 6 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

...wohhh this is cool!, it gives me a new experience in reading poetry...thank you very much for sharing! ^.^..


kimberlyslyrics 6 years ago

Thank you David

very creative and very telling

Kimberly/lyrics


getmyback 6 years ago

I have to agree with Kimberly, very creative indeed.

thank you

billY


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

You Words Mean

SO.. Much Guys~

And Thank You


seasoning 6 years ago

you truly are awful, but i am liking your work....


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

That I am..


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Tara Tufford 6 years ago from Columbus, Ohio

Incredibly creative, but I definitely enjoyed it:)


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Glad To Hear Tara!


poetlorraine 6 years ago

nice, nice nice nice nice......


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Thanks Thanks Thanks!!!

@PoetLorraine!


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truster 6 years ago from A Bed of Roses

Missing memories. Isn't that scary ?


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Very True @ Truster


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truster 6 years ago from A Bed of Roses

Yes ! I can't remember where I know you from ! LMAO


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Real Fantasy 6 years ago from Cleveland

Such an interesting poem. I like the format a lot! It's something different and so... I can't find a word right now but it's great!


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Thank you

@real fantasy

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