Tuning in to tone with Poetry

Tuning in to tune is the emotional atmosphere of the poem. It is happy, sad, satrical, it's something else, when it comes to my writing, Tone tell you a lot about the poet's feeling and lately my feelings been so muchy(:) I guess It's lonely months, October, November, December, and January, where we often feel so isolated, so I often try to keep my audience in tone, and mostly with my sense of humor and my irony.

This is a example of one of my moods..

I am so hurt

I woke up this morning

and what do I see,

You not rushing to greet me,

with one of your wet kisses,

or that sweet honest looks upon your face,

The art of losing isn't a master

however, losing you is a disaster,

Late at night, It's only you and I

into the wee hours of the morning

as ocean sounds swosh in front of me

Here you are hurting me too

I am so hurt.

I once lost a lover, recently my father,

my money, my umbrella,

even a best friend, guess I miss them

however, it wasn's a disaster,

You never said goodbye to me

my watery friend,

sorry, I never knew,

that you were in pain,

I beg of you to forgive me

I will delicate my favorite song to you

as I flush you down the drain,

My watery friend. "All alone again,

Since you say goodbye,

I will keep the water running for you,

Until your little soul reach the ocean

where you will find peace, and once again sparks

"All alone again,

Goodbye my fish, my fishy friend,

I found him floating in his tank this morning face down

My friend fishy eye.

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Phoebe Pike 5 years ago

Cute. :)

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mary615 5 years ago from Florida

So sorry for your loss! Hey, fish are pets, too, right? I no longer have a fish tank, cause I got tired of my fish dying! I did everything I could to keep them happy and well fed in their tanks, too. Now, I just concentrate on my dog! Love your videos!

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Darknlovely3436 5 years ago from NewYork Author

Thank you ladies for stopping by, i am going to missed the little fishy, at night she swim up to the top

and watch me for hours as sit here

going to missed the fish.

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Very fine and wonderful. I liked it very much.

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writer20 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

Great poem to read this morning about your fishy friend.

I remember dropping a fish into a toilet and went back about an hour later to see him swimming I grab the net and flushed him under the tap he lived on for a few more months.

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makusr 5 years ago from India


Greetings from MAKUSR. You may lose anything in life but don't lose yourself. I thank you for having such a kind feeling for a fish. Thanks for sharing.

Lots of Love,


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Darknlovely3436 5 years ago from NewYork Author

makusr thank you for the advised my hubber friend

one love


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