WICKED WEB

Tangled in your strands of evil

  Camouflaged so no one knows

  Spinnerets producing silk

  Interlacing my body, mind and soul

Spewing patterns of complex texture

  Intricately placed to gain control

  Enmeshed in silence thick with rage

  Must I stay or can I go

Orgasmic intensity

  Dangling from above

  Trying to loosen myself

  From your cocoon of twisted love

The tingly sensation I feel

  Knowing eventually that it will bring

  Weaving hatred onto me

  A spidery, painful, venomous sting

Creeping slowly to break free

  The web so complicated, I cannot see

Be strong, take steps

  Continue to crawl

  I can't get caught

  If I just let myself fall

To the lower level where

  Freedom reigns

  More land to roam around

  Can't get caught in your wicked web

It's safer on the ground.

                                                   sms

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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

Love is a wicked web weaved, with all its highs and lows.

We feel its bliss then watch it die, it always comes and goes.

Tingly sensations can turn to pain, it never seems to end.

When will we escape its grasp, and fly away, ascend?

Haha, it's been a while since I left one of those little poem comments :D sorry

This was a good one. You have that style that I mentioned, that is hard to ignore.

Up/awesome :]


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Hey Benny (compelled to call you that for whatever reason:)-- hope it's ok?

There is nothing to be sorry for - I love your poetic comment. Thank you for your thoughtfulness. I look forward to your opinion and comments and am glad you are one of my followers. Thank you, thank you!


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

it's ok, everyone feels inclined to call me something different

Bellawriter calls me "Beny ben ben" LOL

feel free :P


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

:) @ Benny


Sunnie Day 5 years ago

Sharyn,

Really good..love does appear to be like a complex web..It appears he or she got away just in time..Thanks for sharing..:)

Sunnie


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

I agree love is a complex web, but when the perfect love is found it really can't be beaten. I wonderful poem once again.


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Hi Sunnie, It was me in a relationship that was difficult to get out of years ago. Really glad that web is gone. Thanks for commenting :)


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

acaetnna, thanks for stopping by and commenting. I have no doubt that finding a perfect love can't be beaten. It is a matter of being fortunate enough to have found it.


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Chatkath 5 years ago from California

Very intense and well written - I know this web all too well Sharyn, Thank you for sharing this all too familiar situation.


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Chatkath, thanks for stopping by and commenting. This poem actually was written years ago to accompany a book I started but never completed. I have hundreds of typed pages . . . a dozen or so chapters . . . but no ending, maybe it's time I finish that thing :)


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Micky Dee 5 years ago

Let's be careful out there!


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Getting caught in a web can be dangerous . . . thanks Micky!


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epigramman 5 years ago

..this is so darn good it's wicked as in wickedly good and absolutely love your poetic slants and your hall of fame comments to the epi-man put me somewhere far above Cloud 9 - and I still haven't come down yet!!!!!


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Hi Epi,

I am so wickedly happy you stopped by! Your comments mean so much to me. Now listen, you enjoy that Cloud 9 and feel free to stay there. You deserve it! Just keep some room open for visitors from time to time :)

Thank you dear!

Sharyn

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