Waters Of Delight (poem)

She led me to the waters of delight

She led me through a wonder set anew

She led me where enchantment would debut

She led me with a smile I couldn’t fight

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And endless worlds of kisses would ensue

As passion’s rainbow waited for our flight

Was so much more within me to incite

Beyond my feelings realms I never knew

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Her waters flamed consuming endless sea

Mid pleasure even senses couldn’t frame

She led me to where consciousness was gone

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And when I woke was no one there but me

With emptiness no tears on earth could tame

For in the waters part of me was drawn

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vocalcoach 2 years ago from Nashville Tn.

Ohhhhhh - You are a romantic one. As I read through this poetry, I pretend that these words are spoken to me. sigh. And when you awoke no one was there. How sad that is. Voted awesome and beautiful and sharing.


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abbaelijah 2 years ago from Nigeria

Beautiful poem. You are just incredible Mhatter99

that is another interesting hub !

Thanks for sharing !


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manatita44 2 years ago from london

Really cute song and great poem.

The last two stanzas feel that they are missing something, and yet the rhyme is there. Perhaps you can take from the last and give to the penultimate. Was this how you meant to do it? Or was it this way?

Her waters flamed consuming endless sea

Mid pleasure even senses couldn’t frame

With emptiness no tears on earth could tame

And when I woke was no one there but me

She led me to where consciousness was gone

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For in the waters part of me was drawn

Loving thoughts.


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Harishprasad 2 years ago from India

Martin , you have penned a very wonderful poem and touched upon the very nerve of pleasure and bliss. Thanks for sharing such a fascinating beauty with us. voted up.


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Cyndi10 2 years ago from Georgia

Beautiful poem. Everything is lovely and passion rules in the dream state. Some dreams we want to go on and when we do wake up it may seems as if reality is a pale shadow of the dream.

Loved your expression.


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Faith Reaper 2 years ago from southern USA

Beautiful poetry as always, Mh!

Blessings always


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ImKarn23 2 years ago

ummmm...wet dream?

(lol)

Hey...someone had to say it!

HUGS&sharingxx


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BlossomSB 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Beautiful! I just don't know how you do it!


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vkwok 2 years ago from Hawaii

Amazingly beautiful, Martin! And thumbs up on the picture of the Siren from that Doctor Who episode!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Very expressive.

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