We'll Cement Our Closeness in Tomorrow's Golden Sunrise. A Sonnet to Surabhi

It all happened very quickly.

I reached out to You; You reciprocated.

Then our Hearts merged and became One.

Like the advent of mutually loving Samskaras,

We seem to share a cosmic connection.

Come! I see the dancing willow,

Shedding its seeds with the Zephyrs;

Watching as they spring forth,

Into more precious plants in season.

So too, my Love, we’ll cement our closeness,

Now or in another time and destiny,

Leading each other, like the willow and its seeds,

Into a better, brighter, ever-illumining promise,

Of tomorrows’ golden sunrise.

With my Eternal Gratitude,

_Manatita, 4th March, 2016. ©Copyrighted.


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ahorseback 11 months ago

Very Nice , ........are we in love my friend ?!?!?!

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manatita44 11 months ago from london Author

Ha ha ha. It's taken a long time for this question to come. I actually expected it from the girls, though, a long time ago. See, one never knows. I am always in love, bro. Like Beyonce, I'm in a drunken haze. Inebriated with the wine of crimson roses, I know neither my name, nor whence I came.

Lost in the Bliss of the infinite, I bask in the Delight of an effulgent Light. Om Shanti!!

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ahorseback 11 months ago

Ha ! And THAT , is the curse of man , always , always in love ........at least us poets !

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Venkatachari M 11 months ago from Hyderabad, India

Beautiful poem exposing inner heart feelings- pure and innocent.

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manatita44 11 months ago from london Author

Thank you, Thank you, my Friend ahorseback. Have a great day!

Venkatachari, yes, pure and innocent. We are very close. Thank you so much!

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ChitrangadaSharan 11 months ago from New Delhi, India

Lovely poem dedicated to a lovely hubber. Beautifully expressed feelings with lovely pictures. Surabhi would love it.

Thanks for sharing another wonderful hub!

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billybuc 11 months ago from Olympia, WA

I see you've been busy again, mass-producing sonnets in one day. Sigh! I'll try to get to the other two, but time is limited today. I'm heading out the door to my other job. Anyway, nobody does these tributes better than you, my friend. Love and friendship shine with every word you write.

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manatita44 11 months ago from london Author


I thank you. Higher blessings.


I thank you too. You do so much more than me. Mind you, I used to, but this body is slowing down.Much love.

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always exploring 11 months ago from Southern Illinois

Another beauty for a beautiful person. Her poetry shines. You have much in common!

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swalia 11 months ago

A lovely poem for a lovely person...May God bless your friendship!

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manatita44 11 months ago from london Author

Yes, Ruby, I think so too. Good to see you always. Stay well and love to your sister. In Love and Light.

Shaloo, a very nice thing to say. We both want this, like Acharya and Chelaji. We do well. Gratitude ...much.

Surabhi Kaura 11 months ago

Thank you, my Dear Manatita. So fortunate to have you in my life. Yes, I love this dedication very much. God bless you... always.

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emge 11 months ago from Abu Dhabi

To be in love is a great boon and put those sentiments on paper a God given gift. Wonderful poem my friend.

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manatita44 11 months ago from london Author

Surabhi ...Gratitude ....much. Missing you ....Enjoy. Be save. Continue to pray for protection. Always ...-Manatita

Emge, Thank you, thank you... truly speaking, the God-lover sees only God. But you know this, right? Truly appreciate you and your continued support. Om Shanti!

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AliciaC 11 months ago from British Columbia, Canada

This is another lovely poem. Your tributes are always beautiful!

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manatita44 11 months ago from london Author

Alicia, I thank you. Thank You!

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Gypsy Rose Lee 11 months ago from Riga, Latvia

Simply wonderful and most inspirational.

manatita44 11 months ago

Rasma, thank you so much! Appreciated.

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aviannovice 11 months ago from Stillwater, OK

I compare this to my strong love of nature, and the ultimate joy that it brings me. It makes me rise above the ground and I am permitted to see what is normally not meant for human eyes. I am so fortunate to have been given this gift, as have you, dear friend.

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manatita44 11 months ago from london Author

What a sweet thing to say, my Friend Deb and yes, you too, have a real treasure. Wishing you a very sacred and holy week. Happy Easter!!

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bravewarrior 10 months ago from Central Florida

Surabhi's a very lucky lady, Manatita. She can wallpaper her bedroom with all the beautiful poetry you've dedicated to her and she has inspired in you!

Is there something more we should know?????? :-)

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manatita44 10 months ago from london Author

Ha ha again. Not really. I will tell you first, right? (chuckle)

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