What’s For Dinner (limerick)

A night filled with sin burst Joy’s bubble

Now waiting at home dish of trouble

He put pride aside

An softened his stride

He knew if he lied it would double


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

Looks like he is in tasteless trouble.


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

Mhatter99,

Uh oh, someone is in some big trouble! :)


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

Love the picture - very clever.


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vespawoolf 4 years ago from Peru, South America

Is that Alec Baldwin? How appropriate! I'm going to bed now with a smile on my face. : )


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tammyswallow 4 years ago from North Carolina

You write perfect limericks. I am impressed with your style. This is so mischeivous and funny. Someone is going to be in the dog house. :)


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lezsaysit 4 years ago from New York, NY

This was double the fun! Thanks!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

ohh ohh... someone's in trouble... hehehe cute!


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suzettenaples 4 years ago from Taos, NM

Love the limerick and love the photo! Very funny!


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RealHousewife 4 years ago from St. Louis, MO

Oh now a realhousewive can empathize with this! lol Funny!


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LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

lol, lol...... Helirious, and witty! Great job...... :)


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PHILLYDREAMER 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

I had one of these nights last night. LOL.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Ouch!!!.... I hope she made him eat every last petal, :) Your limericks are absolutely priceless.


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eHealer 4 years ago from Las Vegas

Sometimes I wish I had one of those rolling pins... lol. Thanks M, you did it again!


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christin53 4 years ago from UK

Love this and the picture :)


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

He was smart in the final deduction. Too bad he wasn't smart for a moment before that.


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teaches12345 4 years ago

Good thing he brought those flowers home with him, but don't think it made much difference. Very good poem and the picture was a good match for the verses.


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shara63 4 years ago from Delhi

clever mhatter, she is caricatured again..... your experience is not gud that way, seems so....haha!! .....anyways, wonderful poem with the complementing picture !


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barbergirl28 4 years ago from Hemet, Ca

Ha ha ha - after reading your last couple... it sounds like your in trouble often! ;)


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Tonipet 4 years ago from The City of Generals

A sweet surrender? ...that's for dinner! ha ha ha... one of the funniest. You always make my day. Loved the picture!


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

M - I enjoy how you always follow up a poem with a chuckle.


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

quite funny and happens often, I think!

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