When Love Surprises You

Been There Done That

When you think you have seen it all

You have been in love

You have been out of love

Your heart has been broken

There were days you felt on top of the world

Crying till you can't cry anymore

Name calling to make someone else hurt

Being alone and wanting to give it one more try

The useless feeling of everything I loved is gone

To have seen laughter follow sorrow

When you made it work when others said you would fail

To move on when one person still wants to hold on

Backed in a corner and watching the pain set in

Times of affection turn into rejection

When all these emotions are stirred

The end result must be heard

We have been through so much

We have cared so deeply

Finding a love that will last

Is a miracle in this world

To be experienced by every lover

Who dreams of something so special

That it can 't be topped or made better

Just understood and nurtured

Until it is shared forever

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KristenGrace 5 years ago from Philadelphia, PA

Well said. I quite like this. :)


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DREAM ON 5 years ago Author

KristenGrace I have so many feelings about love. I didn't know if I should tell the good side of love or the bad or both.I couldn't do one without the other.Thank you so much.


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

Beautiful and so true. Love the way you write.


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DREAM ON 5 years ago Author

Dim Flaxenwick I guess you know how to bring the best out in people.Thank you for enjoying just another layer of love.


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

Don´t know about me bringing out the best in people.

I came back for another read ´cos the lines...¨We have been through so much ,

We have cared so deeply¨¨¨ were stuck in my head.

Beautiful poem Thank you x


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Nellieanna 5 years ago from TEXAS

Truly it is - beautiful, from the heart, from the pain and joy of having loved. Good stuff, DO. Deserves high votes!


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DREAM ON 5 years ago Author

Dim Flaxenwick I am always learning a little more about love.Nellieanna Love is so special.It is often wonderful to share with friends.Thanks.


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Joy56 5 years ago

all we need is love....


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DREAM ON 5 years ago Author

Joy56 It sounds so SIMPLE but it becomes so difficult.Break the walls and set your love free.It is so nice to love and be loved again.


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brandonfan 5 years ago from Mid West

All of these emotions have been shared by so many. I love the way you put them into words!

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