Your Haughty Sneer

Hasty, haughty judgement....

Snapping Cupid's arrow....
Snapping Cupid's arrow.... | Source

May I have this dance?


I once was so bliss stricken,

I thought I must be smitten,

With love from Cupid’s bow.


But with your haughty sneer

Fresh sounded in my ear,

‘twas dashed upon the rocks below.


You could have thought more twice,

It surely would be nice,

If love might have a second chance.


You may have found another

Who will treat you like a brother,

But never know the thrill of our lost dance.


For I have found my lover,

And need not any other

With thrills no less than mine that day.


When with that haughty sneer,

You pranced away to cheer

Lost love you might have had, to stay.

 

© 2012 Demas W. Jasper All rights reserved.

One dance leads to another....

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Comments 17 comments

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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

Nice share sir! thanks!


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

nice poetry. I like it.


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

I really enjoyed this poem!!!


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cherylone 4 years ago from Connecticut

I like it. You seem to hit things right on the nail head when you write. good poem.


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Great read, thank you. Voted up and beautiful.


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

i hate that haughty sneer too! Fer sure!


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Perspycacious 4 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond Author

It may be a cop out to say "Thanks, everyone." But I am happy that you enjoyed this or found it something you recognize and could appreciate. Folks can be cruel, even if they aren't also bullies. The "haughty sneer" says in effect, "I wouldn't dain to dance with someone like you. I have my mind fixed on something better, more exciting, older, younger, taller, shorter, etc. And isn't it a form of judging?


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

great poem I loved it.. You are very good at this.. I can tell you have been doing this a long time

Voted way up

Debbie


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Perspycacious 4 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond Author

Deborah Brooks: Converting thoughts to words is something we all do. Writers do it with written words, the rest of us do it in daily speech. We revere the ones who can do it fluently in either case, especially those who do so cleverly and well, some with all the beauty of a Winston Churchill who did speech and writing so well. Many Hubbers have this gift as we all know, and we seek them out to improve our own capabilities. Thanks for your reading of this one of my efforts here.


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MartieCoetser 4 years ago from South Africa

... those haughty fatal sneers...

Some people are accomplished sneerers - they kill the love they so desperately need...

Only heaven knows why.

Voted up and sad :)


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful but with a touch of sadness. It is usually those who sneer who wind up as the losers.


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

and one day, they too shall receive a haughty sneer from someone even more judgmental than them....enjoyed reading your hub! vote up


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Perspycacious 4 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond Author

Four Up votes in a row! Thanks folks.


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BlossomSB 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Great poem. Life's like that, isn't it? Voted up.


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

it's just a faux pas Sir...


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Perspycacious 4 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond Author

BlossomSB: Yes, life is often like that, even when the haughty sneers are kept inside by the sneerer. Thanks for the vote.


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Perspycacious 4 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond Author

raciniwa: It was not a mistake to ask, and (who knows?) it may not have been a mistake to decline...except for the form used to express the refusal. Thanks for the comment.

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