Your Mood (poem)

In the blessing of your mood

Lavishes your eyes exude

Fantasies my mind preclude

Paradise I can’t elude

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Fascination there was strewed

In the fullness of your mood

Even time could not delude

Feelings which a heart imbued

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Hopes and wonders were renewed

Dream which passions had accrued

In the richness of your mood

All my searches there conclude

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Caught within a veil of fire

Set ablaze by lost desire

Every breath I took was dire

Skies of you I now aspire

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All that patter I elude

Worthless fashions once so spewed

For a truth my soul had viewed

In the stillness of your mood

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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Whew, Mh, now that is one good mood there! When I read your title initially, I thought it was going to be a limerick about the other not so good kind of mood. : )

Love the imagery, music and video ... all certainly adding to "the mood."

Up and more .... sharing too

God bless, Faith Reaper


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

A beautiful photo with the mod explains it all such great words of expression


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Beautiful. For eyes to elicit such love and passion is awesome.


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ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

Faith said it so well. I, too love the imagery and music adding to the mood.

Kim


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Great imagery and however did you find all those rhymes? You did it so well.


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MsDora 3 years ago from The Caribbean

Awesome Verses! What a pleasant surprise.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

This was such a pleasure to read..beautiful words to ponder. Thank you Martin. You are a true poet my friend.


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

Your poems are always so epic! This was very romantic and beautiful.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

VERY nicely done. This was a great pleasure to real, flowing so well.


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tillsontitan 2 years ago from New York

Definitely improved my mood ;) As always you leave us with lots to think about.

Voted up, awesome, and beautiful.

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