Five Cinquains
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Cinquains
B y A. Gagliardi
Clematis
Clematis.
White blossoms
inflate my heart
with pleasure of unsuspected
beauty.
Snow falls
around our tree,
softly, steadily, cloak-
ing our marriage bed and shouting
enough!
Oh My!
Missed your birthday!
Can't believe how time flies.
Thought you were set upon the throne
of youth.
Says You
Says you,
the umpteenth time.
“All your opinions are
mine.” Unless I choose to differ
with you.
Wren
Small bird
at my window
sitting, singing, looking
in - eying my lunch crackers greed-
i-ly .
What is a cinquain?
A cinquain is a precisely counted five lined poem. (A.K.A. a quintain or qintet) It can stand alone as a poem or act as a stanza or stanzas withing a larger work. It is thought that this form or poetry originated in French medieval times. The Cinquain tells a little story, with some action or expresses feeling.
The counting is in the words or the syllables and there are a specified number on each line.
- line one: is one word ( a noun or a subject - the title)
- line two: ( consists of two words that describe line one, usually adjectives describing the title)
- line three: (three words that provide action, usually verbs or words ending in -ing)
- line four: (four words that provide feeling, and may be one phrase or complete the sentence)
line five: (One word again; a noun that sums it up, or is a synonym for line one)
If you look just at syllables, this type of poem provides an opportunity and a challenge to write a poem with meaning in just twenty two syllables.
- Line one: 2 noun syllables
- Line two: 4 adjective syllables
- Line three: 6 verb syllables
- Line four: 8 syllables
- Line five: 2 synonym syllables.
Writing a poem using this last syllable count, a Didactic Cinquain technique, also provides the release of word choice, so it doesn't matter wither the word is a noun, verb, adjective, or synonym.
Third graders from Kenny Community School do Cinquains
Cinquain
By Grant
Kitten
Playful, funny
Running, playing, licking
Kittens are mini tigers. Roar
Kitty!
The Clown
By Kyjuan
The clown
Crazy, funny
Scarying, jumping, running.
The clown is tricky, magical
performance.
Cool Cat
By Latianna
Cool Cat
furry, funny
eating, licking, playing
She loves her kittens very much
Mother.
Dessert
By Aysia
Dessert
Yummy, oh my
dancing, celebrating, enjoying
on my birthday delicious cake
party.
Dark Night
By Jacqulynn
Dark night
frighten, scary,
yelling, screaming, running.
People crying over strange noise.
Thunder!
Pickles
By Harry
Pickles
green and bumpy
sitting, doing nothing.
Pickles are very sour and weird
cucumbers.
Oh, Chips
By Kentrell
Oh, chips
tasty, sweet
brown, tiny, crispy
smooth, brown, salty, chocolate chip
snack.
Cutie
By Phataja
Cutie
noisy, playful
breaking, rolling, puppies
black as the night, smart as
my pet.
Cinquain Poem
By Aidan
kitkat
rich and creamy
eyeing, looking, drooling
can’t wait to sink your teeth into
cocoa
Dog
By Betsy
Puppy
playful, happy
playing, sleeping, running
I throw a ball, he catches it
Doggy.
Cinquain
By Aislin
Butter
silky, creamy
drooling, waiting, sneaking,
licking my fingers and dreaming
cream stick
Cinquain
By Olivia
Ice cream
toppings, yummy
sugar, smelling, licking
ice cream is so delicious
Brain freeze!
Cinquain
By Miles
Snowflake
graceful, falling
freezing, flying, dancing
delightful flowing in the air
white snow
My Cat
By Quentin
My Cat
pooping icky
licking, scratching, napping
My cat is a scratching beast, roar!
Meow!
Piehka
By Aiisha
Piehka
playful, graceful
playing, laughing, jumping
fun for all of the kids yahoo
School
Fun Pet
By Justin
Fun Pet
furry and loud
purring, licking, sleeping
moves very fast and agilely
Kitten
Cookies
By Haydan
Cookies
Wonder, yummy
Eating, munching, snacking
Mega delicious flour baked
Biscuit
Cowboy
By Preston
Cowboy
menacing, wild
calming, weirdo, awesome.
When the cowboy meets his cowgirl
lasso!
Dessert
By Umayyah
Dessert
yummy, sugary
eating, laughing, playing
blue cone with cotton candy fun
so good!
Cinquain
by Jaida
Kitten
playful, funny
playing, jumping, running
little cats playing with big cats
kitty
Teaching Poetry
I recently had the pleasure of teaching a "making Cinquains" Lesson to third graders in the school where I teach. The students were witty, bright, funny and intriguing. And they worked tocome up with great poetry! Check out the poems they created.
Your Turn!
Now it's your turn to try a Cinquain poem. Put your work in a comment below. We would love to see what you come up with.
Thanks for playing our game of poetry.