closing in on me

 the walls are closing in on me




i should NOT have let you in.

but i did

i couldnt help it

so you went away

i knew you would

if you had let me

just let me

do this the way

that i knew would hurt him less

then things would have been alright

but now

guess where he is

guess what hes doing


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epigramman 6 years ago are not pulling any poetic punches - one just came and gave me a black eye - but at least I am walking away from here with a souvenir!

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JayDeck 6 years ago from New Jersey

I enjoyed this!



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puresilence 6 years ago from New Delhi

good one and nice photograph as well

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