A Poem about Life and Love: "Flashbacks"
When my soul meet yours-
My heart dribbles quickly!
I need to catch up my breath slowly.
Something flashed in a dash,
Not knowing when it will last.
My out of this world fantasies rushed
To my memory that almost crushed.
But suddenly flashbacks came
Clearly as the sun rays
Passing to my bewildered eyes
That soon began to care
I see you and me in our golden hours
Sitting side by side
Laughing as words from our lips glide
You treat me as a friend as I do
But my feelings betray me
Like a sickness from a curse
I fall for you..
I love you sincerely..
Until it drives me crazy
I try to tell you
But you ignore it obviously
I said, I can wait no matter what
But you refuse strongly
And worst…
You try to avoid me eagerly
As if, I am not existing
I cry bitterly
With wine as my shield
Just to hide the stub ‘til I sleep
I insist again
But answers from you
Still a big question mark for me
Answers that I’ve been longing since then
That can make my heartache fades
Then suddenly…
A whack land on my nape
Hey! Wake up!
Images vanished in light
As my soul back
To my material body
Then a sigh came….
When will my dream of me and you
Will be real?....!
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Cool!
great poetry well said thanks
Great writing style!
Very Nice Peice.
Sad story, but all too common. Lots of emotion went into this piece. Liked it.
THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR ALL YOUR COMMENTS! ^.^
Nice - "You try to avoid me eagerly" - and expressive :)
Great imagery in your poem.
Namaste.
Nice poem, I enjoyed reading it :)
this is all to familiar a story, expressed so well in your words, well done.
...let me express my gratitude in my own language- MARAMING SALAMAT PO ULI SA INYONG LAHAT!(thank you very much once again to all of you!)...
Yeah this is a familiar one because usually it happens in real life... :(....but that's life!
Sweet words, even full of pain. Thank for sharing, Pinkhawk.
Thank you ma'am Freya Cesare!^.^
Very good,just enough to make us wonder! Polly
Hello ma'am Polly! Thank you for dropping by, ^.^!
love it, I've felt like this too many times!
Thank you Simply Jill, I'm glad that you liked it... Oh really!? Sometimes we have to experience different things unexpectedly, could be positive or negative but for sure these things taught us a lesson that we can use to survive and become a better person, just go on and you'll see...^.^
Yet another extremely impressive poem! The words are powerful and it flows so beautifully. I could really relate to this one Pinkhawk. Very visual and moving. Great job! :)
Hello ms. serendipity88! ^.^ Thank you verry muchh for appreciating this. I'm happy that you can relate with it..^.^ SALAMAT PO! :)
Very eloquent... it steers the souls! Thanks for sharing. Voted up because it deserves such a vote! =)
Ah Yes - I have felt like this before. You write beautifully and truthfully. Thank you. Well done! Rated up.
The power of the imagination, is best when we think about love that could be.
@DjBryle, vocalcoach, and cleaner3, your great words are indeed an inspiration for me. Thank you so much! ^_^
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