Poem: Flashbacks

When my soul meet yours-

my heart dribbles quickly.

I need to catch up my breath slowly

something flashed in a dash,

not knowing when it will last

my out of this world fantasies rushed

to my memory that almost crushed.

but suddenly flashbacks came

clearly as the sun rays

passing to my bewildered eyes

that soon began to care

I see you and me in our golden hours

sitting side by side

laughing as words from our lips glide

you treat me as a friend as I do

but my feelings betrayed me

like a sickness from a curse

I fall for you..

I love you sincerely..

until it drives me crazy

I tried to tell you

but you ignored it

I said, I can wait no matter what

but you refused strongly

and worst…

you tried to avoid me eagerly

as if, I am not existing

I cry bitterly

with wine as my shield

just to hide the stub ‘til I sleep

I insisted again

but answers from you

still a big question mark

answers that I’ve been longing since then

that can make my heartache fades

then suddenly…

a whack landed on my nape

hey! wake up!

images vanished in light

as my soul back

to my material body

then a sigh came….

when will my dream of me and you

will be real?

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warrioRR 6 years ago from Rawalpindi Pakistan

Cool!


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thevoice 6 years ago from carthage ill

great poetry well said thanks


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Michael Shane 6 years ago from Gadsden, Alabama

Great writing style!


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

Very Nice Peice.


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valeriebelew 6 years ago from Metro Atlanta, GA, USA

Sad story, but all too common. Lots of emotion went into this piece. Liked it.


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pinkhawk 6 years ago from Pearl of the Orient Author

THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR ALL YOUR COMMENTS! ^.^


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alternate poet 6 years ago

Nice - "You try to avoid me eagerly" - and expressive :)


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Deborah Demander 6 years ago from First Wyoming, then THE WORLD

Great imagery in your poem.

Namaste.


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Coolmon2009 6 years ago from Texas, USA

Nice poem, I enjoyed reading it :)


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Joy56 6 years ago

this is all to familiar a story, expressed so well in your words, well done.


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pinkhawk 6 years ago from Pearl of the Orient Author

...let me express my gratitude in my own language- MARAMING SALAMAT PO ULI SA INYONG LAHAT!(thank you very much once again to all of you!)...

Yeah this is a familiar one because usually it happens in real life... :(....but that's life!


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Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

Sweet words, even full of pain. Thank for sharing, Pinkhawk.


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pinkhawk 6 years ago from Pearl of the Orient Author

Thank you ma'am Freya Cesare!^.^


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Pollyannalana 6 years ago from US

Very good,just enough to make us wonder! Polly


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pinkhawk 6 years ago from Pearl of the Orient Author

Hello ma'am Polly! Thank you for dropping by, ^.^!


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Simply Jill 6 years ago

love it, I've felt like this too many times!


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pinkhawk 6 years ago from Pearl of the Orient Author

Thank you Simply Jill, I'm glad that you liked it... Oh really!? Sometimes we have to experience different things unexpectedly, could be positive or negative but for sure these things taught us a lesson that we can use to survive and become a better person, just go on and you'll see...^.^


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Serendipity88 6 years ago from California

Yet another extremely impressive poem! The words are powerful and it flows so beautifully. I could really relate to this one Pinkhawk. Very visual and moving. Great job! :)


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pinkhawk 6 years ago from Pearl of the Orient Author

Hello ms. serendipity88! ^.^ Thank you verry muchh for appreciating this. I'm happy that you can relate with it..^.^ SALAMAT PO! :)


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DjBryle 6 years ago from Somewhere in the LINES of your MIND, and HOPEFULLY at the RIPPLES of your HEART. =)

Very eloquent... it steers the souls! Thanks for sharing. Voted up because it deserves such a vote! =)


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vocalcoach 6 years ago from Nashville Tn.

Ah Yes - I have felt like this before. You write beautifully and truthfully. Thank you. Well done! Rated up.


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

The power of the imagination, is best when we think about love that could be.


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pinkhawk 4 years ago from Pearl of the Orient Author

@DjBryle, vocalcoach, and cleaner3, your great words are indeed an inspiration for me. Thank you so much! ^_^

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