Lovers

surrounded by the thick

moist

blanket

of the waters

offering.....

the earth

surrenders itself to its needs....

velvet softness

anxious

climatic

you....

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ahorseback 5 years ago

I love the simplicity of great poetry. Its instant ,this gratification!....well done ....:-}


lostwithinmyself 5 years ago

Very good. voted up x


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Lucky Cats 5 years ago from The beautiful Napa Valley, California

Very romantic in the vast essence of the word, jujubees...encompassing!


Binaya.Ghimire 5 years ago

few words but captures infinite truth.


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legitimo 5 years ago from UNITED STATES

very interesting,I vote it up.

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