Poem: Life and Struggle

In Boxing - KNOCK IT OUT!


All the bitter memories of the past- knock it out!

All the bad moods forming your face- stretch it out!

All the grudges hidden inside you- let it out!

Make your heart empty…

Empty with negative emotional things…

Try it!

Try to climb the highest peak of your dream straightly.

Punch down all the obstacles pestering you,

Break all the thorns scratching you,

Beat the tiredness stopping you,

Kill the laziness holding you..

And burn the devil tempting you…

Hey come on- full force- full strength!!

Until the ultimate healing carry you up-

In the garden of seventh heaven, blend with the paradise of fulfillment

Just go on…just do it!!!

KNOCK IT DOWN!

any comments and violent reactions? please correct me if i'm wrong..thank you very much!

we can do it! :)

...just remember that no matter what---always maintain the cleanliness of your heart!!! :)

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hope you can say something about this esp errors...thank you very much! :) 2 comments

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Haunty 7 years ago from Hungary

Wow, a cool new ten commandments! :) I'll do it now!


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pinkhawk 7 years ago from Pearl of the Orient Author

..:)...thank you very much Sir for dropping by (maraming salamat po!) :)

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