the pretty song

Darkness creeps in silently. Lost within your memory.Your eyes light up my night sky, shining love for you. Id fade away without you. Lost and Hopeless..Fighting the tears.. Without you here... This pain pours from my soul. Chorus..Listen for my tears of pain. No longer part of my shame .Ive let go...Let love show. ..through our dreams of fame......

Can we pretend our pain will fade...Time slowly takes the past away...my pain...your shame...this hate, will fade..You were gone for so damn long. Still to you i belong. Emotions come flooding back.Love is what my heart sings.Happieness I have never known. You have shown me there is hope..fueled by the trust youve shown..

chorus2.........our love ignites with a flame.That has veen lost in time. With one smile you take my breath. Will love ..be second guessed .. to your soul im grateful..Eternity is not so long when im here in your arms..

Smile, im here, my hearts, beating. Those eyes, No Lies..I never felt warmth like this

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Malak Pain 4 years ago

Would have been beautiful sung by you at our wedding


rasw 4 years ago

I want it back too.


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Zayleen Pain 4 years ago from lost in my own minds lines Author

thank u for the comments


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Zayleen, a very different write from you . You are a talented poet but you will get better the more you write.

I like the rage from you but this soft side is great to and would like to see more of this . any reccomendations. I write love poetry, got to my hub and check out a few leave me a comment on how you feel.


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Zayleen Pain 4 years ago from lost in my own minds lines Author

this is actually a song i will eventuallypost me singing itwhen i get the means


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Zayleen,my tender flower,

See, I have seen your other work. I want to learn how to channel rage and pain like you do.I know how to write about heartache but the rage you express it unique and I need that to come out of me. i don't understand what you mean when you say you need the means?


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

You are very talented, I feel like I can hear this song just by reading your soulful words!

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