An excerpt from the book "Up One Level".

A few years ago, the body of Jennifer Short was discovered in a festering, water filled ditch or more accurately, her skull and some other body parts were found in a festering, water filled ditch.

Jennifer was a pretty,10 year old little girl whose parents were murdered during an incident and she had been missing since. Apparently the police had a possible lead back then but so far, no arrests had been made.

I want to say just one thing here. When and if they find this bastard, and convict him of the murders with the usual 12 person jury. He should then go before a new review board of experienced legal and forensic professionals that would further determine his guilt to the absolute.

If this board concludes there is no doubt what so ever of his guilt, his next stop would be a brand new prison complex constructed especially for animals like him. A prison with a new twist built by the Federal Government, designed by the CIA, the KGB, and The Imagineers from Disney World.

This new prison complex is simply a form of punishment designed specifically to equal the gravity of crimes such as Jennifer Short no doubt endured. Nothing more, nothing less. A deterrent, for what it's worth, not entertainment, not retribution, not vengeance, just pure and simple justice.

This new complex of cells would be totally automated and programmed to operate until its occupant was dead and gone. Come to think of it, Alcatraz would make a perfect location.

Designed to be a halo deck of horror with no safety protocols installed except those required to keep its occupant alive up to a maximum of 3 months. These cells and their automated programs would inflict the very worst and most imaginative forms of physical torture, pain and mental anguish mankind and all his high tech abilities could possibly conceive.

Room one for example, might be an empty, all steel room with an ambient temperature of 115 degrees and a floor that reaches a skin frying 150 degrees where one would spend a day or two hopping about naked.

Room two could be fitted with a dozen or so infra-red aimed lasers set to fire and burn tiny holes in the flesh at short, random intervals for at least a full day.

On the way to room three a total body spray of rubbing alcohol would serve to prevent infection and remind him what pain was really all about. Of course, in order to reap the full benefits of the complex an inmate would have to physically recuperate every few days.

Room four, the rec room, would provide a comfortable easy chair centered in the middle of a maxed out 300-watt stereo with surround sound playing Chinese music all day and all night. The inmate would also need to eat to keep up his energy.

Room five would be the cafeteria. Well stocked with 5 star maggots, choice portions of other prisons sewerage, and assorted delicacies fit for child rapists/murderers. Powerful lasers would again fire automatically if the food were not consumed at 15-minute intervals.

Once re-energized, the inmate would be shuttled to room six where his genitals would be placed in a self-tightening vice that slowly and automatically closed down to perhaps a quarter inch gap before releasing him 24 hours later. I don’t know, 15 or 20 more rooms ought to get the job done.

We might even establish a major deterrent once word got around that if you mess with our kids, here is where you going to wind up. That could easily be accomplished by forcing convicted pedophiles to witness the entire process as a parole requirement.

Before being placed in this new house of horrors, a team of physiologists would determine the inmates worse fears and phobias and the system programmed to accommodate its new guest. Once stripped naked and placed within, the inmate would be shuttled from room to room and forgotten about until a red light indicates his demise up to 90 days later at which point what is left of his mind and body would be automatically dissolved in an acid-bath and flushed down the institutions sewer. The system would then wash itself down, reset, and a large green light would illuminate… Next!

When this new system is well known by potential rapists and murderers of our children, maybe, just maybe, one or two will think twice. If not, so be it, they deserve far more than the best of these systems could ever inflict. Only a few states still have the kahonies to take the lives of animals like this and at best, that doesn't happen for 10 to 20 years. When and if it does, the execution is performed in the very least painful, respectful, and quickest, candy-ass method possible. Complete with religious preparations and friendly good-byes. Shameful isn't it?

These days all we do to these butchers is change their life styles. In a lot of ways they're much better off than being on the outside. They get their every need attended to from a balanced diet to medical and dental care. They get entertainment, exercise, free legal assistance, tooth paste, you name it, year after year after year while their victims are putrefying in their graves after enduring incomprehensible horror and death.

Most of the time these despicable sons a bitches get life! Life? Am I hearing myself correctly? They torture, rape, and kill one or more of our most precious possessions in ways I could only imagine and we give them life? Are you kidding me?

Something is radically wrong here folks. Not only do we give them life but we spend ten million dollars protecting their quality of life and their human rights until they die from old age or use up their appeals 16 years later. Let me know if you incorporate this idea one-day. One of my lifelong hobbies is creative electronics and I'd be glad to contribute plans for a room or two. Free of charge!

Have we all lost our minds or has our religious brain washing blinded us as bad as it looks? Any pole of outside, unbiased observers would vote 100% "yes" on both counts. I'm here to tell you there is a much higher authority than your cockamamie gods. To prove it, put any holiest of holy, sanctimonious, bible thumping parent in the same room with one of these bastards just after or during the rape, torture, and murdered of his 10 year old little girl. You'll soon see justice, you'll see reality, and you'll soon see his man-made religion disappear right before your eyes when he rips his daughters attacker apart with his bare hands. If he doesn't, as far as I'm concerned you can run him through the new complex along with the killer.

We easily justify dropping bombs on thousands of innocent people including children just like ours, yet when it comes to a convicted child rapist, torturer, and murderer, you sanctify and entertain yourselves by administering him mercy the rest of his years and claim human compassion in God’s name. Not to mention the millions of dollars you waste on each and every one of these bastards that could provide food for starving children that are also dying horrible deaths as I speak.

Shame on you! Shame on us all! Before you conclude anything at all from this hub, try to imagine, as long as it takes you, and in as much depth as you can, what these little girls must endure up to and including the moment of their deaths. Personally, I cannot think of anything more horrific for an adult let alone a child. Then, you may administer justice in your minds, and not before.

In my mind, there is no punishment on earth severe enough. If you cannot justify my form of adjudication in these cases, then take the bastards outside and shoot them on the spot for Christ sake.

Anything less mocks the preciousness of human life itself, especially young and innocent human life that relies on and trusts our adult world for protection from animals like these.

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Wilbur 6 years ago


Until you have experienced the deep pain and anguish of the removal of a loved one's life or purity, this would all sound harsh to you.

Hardened Criminals are no longer human. To act inhumanely is to be inhumane and thus is a willful act against every human right deserved!

Mummysibe 5 years ago

I wholeheartedly agree. For some prison is fitting. But not Paedophiles -they can not be cured -they remain a risk to our children -death -job done. If we can allow the parents to do a better and longer regime of punishment so be it.

One thing though...Whilst it may serve as a deterrent for some I don't think it would stop all paedophiles acting on their sick impulses -many are never caught and don't believe they will ever be. For those we'll always have pain.

Pisses me off when the gov't claims that harsher prison sentences and capital punishment would drive them under ground -er exactly how is that any different to now then? I am not aware of any paedophiles who are open about it!! Are they perhaps not trying hard enough to not get caught? Am I missing something? No. The British fucking justice system is!!

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Craig Suits 5 years ago from Florida Author

Wilber...What's human and what isn't, I don't think is relivent. Rape and murder our children and your dead it's that simple. or should be...

Tnx for the comeback...

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Craig Suits 5 years ago from Florida Author

The US justice system is no different Mummy. Way too many bleeding hearts looking to avoid cruel and inhuman punishment which I find an insane philosphy considering what they do to some of our children. I would personally volunteer to be the adjudicator for both our countries and no one would have to worry about justice served ever agian. If I got the job, they'd just send the prisoners to me and be done with it. And oh yeah! I'll need a bat! Make that a bat with nails in the end...

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AngelaKaelin 5 years ago from New York

Too many people do not care about the victims of such crimes. It is more convenient to blame the victim than to do something about all of the violent criminals. The only thing people can do is be prepared to take matters into their own hands. Always try to keep yourself in a situation where you can defend yourself, if necessary. The thing about rapists and killers is they attack when you least expect it. Good hub!

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Craig Suits 5 years ago from Florida Author

Couldn't agree more Angela except kids can be taught to beware of suspicious characters and it's true, over the years many a kid has screamed, kicked, bitten, run and other things that work but not all the time. A lot of times they even know the bastards. Well you read the hub. Left up to me, their deaths would be so horrible there's a chance once the word got out, one or two might think twice. And ya know, that goes for all rapist in general. 20 years in the hoosecow is a vacation to some of these sons a bitches or just legally put them in a room with the husband, father, or boyfriend for a day or so. Save the state a ton of money.

Thanks for the comeback...


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Sarasotablonde38 5 years ago from FLORIDA

Great post!!! I am ALL for these such rooms!!! I've got some great ideas on a few rooms!!!! ;) Good job!!!

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Craig Suits 5 years ago from Florida Author

Hiya Sarasotablond38...Welcome a broad *%##?.?# abroad...

Finally got some class huh? I don't know if you know it or not after reading your home Hubpage intro but your talking to your friend...The Dooman. I'm the one that wrote this article. I'd love to hear your ideas for the new pedophile condo, grusom most likely but that's the whole idea.

Let's hear what you got to say. Posting hubs is easy after the first one. Beats the hell out of ("Well gee, I'm getting sleepy I think I'll go to bed now") on Facebook...

I know some really great people from around the world I'll intro you to after you post your first hub....

Love the monika....

I'll be on the way back there before long. Got some unfinished business here yet.

Stay cool kiddo and make your studies priority #1. Hell your might even be able to whoop me at chess one day........Nah

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Sarasotablonde38 5 years ago from FLORIDA

What should I write about?? Looks like people write about just about any and everything! Which is cool!! I love knowledge!!! School is #1 worries!!! :)

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Craig Suits 5 years ago from Florida Author

Hiya Sexy Blond...

Given the subject a bit of thought. you'll come up with a gazillion ideas to write about. You've been around the block a few times, there's no end to the experiences and stories you can come up with let along new subjects and thoughts that interest you. I guarantee you, by the time your done with your first hub, you will have discovered many others to write about and once posted, people will be reading them for years to come. The world awaits your experiences and what your mind contains. (Oh Lord)......

Start out with something you know well like your recent operation or signing up for online classes. You will be suprised how many people are in the same boat that could use your advice, do's and don'ts.

Don't hold back and be honest. At first, you'll get droves of followers mostly because your a sexy blond and the same applies to good looking young guys as well but after that you'll be judged by what you write and how well you write it which is what's inside you as a human being.

Some will have you for breakfast in this comment section. Others will give their honest opinions of your work. Some will ignore you and a very small percentage will get out of line. Report them. They don't belong here. The thing is, you'll be read by people around the globe everyday. It won't be long before you get an idea of what your made of. It takes a little time so get started. Pick a subject you love, cry havoc, and let loose the dogs of war.

I know you'll Doo very well.I've been following your female dribble on facebook as you know and you got talent, you just need direction and a place to get real for a change.

Take your time and use your best grammer and spelling. Post a half dozen relivent pics you can Google up and always remember: here, the more common or outragious interest of the suject matter will pull the most readers and followers but that's not to say some people wouldn't be interested in say...Oh....."How To Have Fun With Ementholated Alkaloids" as well.

If your need any pics, I have an instant access database of 72 thousand items I could easily pick out what you need and send them.

By the way, my book "Up One Level" will be on display at the Javits Convention Center in NYC from the 23rd to the 27th at a really big book expo this month. You may be calling me Mr.Doo before long :>)

Check it out:

Keep in mind that the vast majority of people useing Hubpages are in it to make money. You can post your own ads, for just about anything from advice to affilliate products you can get by the thousands. You'll see. get a few hubs going first...


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krsharp05 4 years ago from 18th and Vine

Mr. Suits

While I agree that violent offenders should experience nothing short of the hellish nightmare that the victim and their families go through, I spent two years working in a maximum security prison and I assure you, there are no indulgences or luxuries. The "balanced diet" is only balanced by the grace of soy. There is no entertainment in max or super-max unless they are dancing in their cells. If they are dancing in their cells, it's with another man and to me, that's street justice that I am perfectly okay with. My mother was killed when I was very young and I always thought I wanted the man responsible for her death to be killed in the ugliest possible manner until I spent those two years at the prison. It was then that I decided he should become someone's personal slave for the rest of his rotting years. I wrote a short hub about it.

I'd be interested to see what you think since you are the opposing view. I must say that your idea for having an "open prison" is interesting because I've tossed around the idea of housing inmates on an oil rig type facility out in the middle of the ocean. Then, offer the inmates who have been sentenced to death a trade to commute their sentence to life if they will agree to be human test candidates for highly unethical medical drug tests. Food for thought. I should write a hub about it!

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Craig Suits 4 years ago from Florida Author

Hiya Kr...

I read your prison hub and you raise an excellent point when you state capitol punishment simply free's a prisoner.

I did not mean to suggest a prisoner in any degree of lockdown was living the life of Riley but they are all being taken care of and given all the basics in order to life a long and healtly life and makeing child rapists live the horror of daily prison life sounds logical as compaired to the death penalty that would (as you say) free them.

I have three issues where I disagree:

One...Considering we have starving children all over the place in this world and money is the only way we have of feeding them, money has to be considered a prescious commodity and personally, I don't want to waste one nickle of it on a child rapist.

Two...Capitol punishment the way I see it is not a system of freeing a prisoner, it's a way of killing him. If your dead, your not free as you put it, your dead, but I know what your inferring.

Three... No matter what plan of action I contemplate in a form of punishment in respect to a child rapist/murderer I can't help but consider the torture these little girls must endure. That leads me to one conclusion....kill the bastards in the most prolonged and inhuman way we can concieve and with the 3 month, new and automated system I've described above, it would be so horrific, there's a possibility these SOB's may think twice before they grab one of our children in the future.

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krsharp05 4 years ago from 18th and Vine

I understand exactly what you're saying.

In prison, after someone is raped, they are required by law to videotape the medical interview. We used to show those videos to the youth offenders as a means of (hopeful) deterrence. One boy actually peed himself and it was a beautiful thing. The rape videos were grotesque but necessary.

When an offender kidnaps and kills a child, the duration is typically no longer than 3-5 days, give or take. I think it's fair that the offender spend 50 years to life being raped and beaten on a regular basis for what he did. Nevertheless, I think we agree that the punishment be severe.

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Craig Suits 4 years ago from Florida Author

Given it more thought. Keeping these bastards alive I could agree with but only if they were sytematicly tortured daily with the most horrific methods imaginable until they died from fear or went insane. Three lions kept in an outdoor area visible to the general population would be a very efficiect and effective way of desposing of these people dead or alive. The lions excrements would be used to fertilize the prison garden. Perfect!

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gmwilliams 4 years ago from the Greatest City In The World-New York City, New York

To Craig Suits: I am with you on this a milnillion percent. Any form( I will not see human being or person ) who intentionally violates our precious children and innocent people should be put not in a jail but in a penal colony somewhere in the wilderness where he/she slowly starves to death. This form should not even be given the creature amenities! I am with you- great hub!

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Craig Suits 4 years ago from Florida Author

Thanks for the comeback GM. Yeah, it's about time we gave these animals a little of what they give our children. Fear, tourture, and death. And drag the punishment out as long as we can keep the son-a- bitches alive...

Samantha 4 years ago

I pray that I will see the day when the death sentence is given to all child rapist and murderers, no more slap on the wrist sentences that are currently being handed down, you wonder why the statistics on child rape and murder is increasing each year! I have read all the stories of crimes against children thanks to the site 'god bless our lost angels' more names are added than not and always the sentence never fits the horrific crimes against these children. I read numerous posts and its clear that so many people share the same view and are fighting for the same cause to protect our children but still to this day there doesnt seem to be a massive change to the sentences that are handed out for these crimes!I dare not imagine the kind of pain, abuse and suffering a child must endure to bring on a death sentence.When will enough be enough, how many more children must die this way before this is in place! Life imprisonment with a daily dose of slow pain or the death penalty is what these monsters deserve.

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Craig Suits 4 years ago from Florida Author

I completely agree except that I'd have a tendency to be a bit more diabolical with my sentences. Our polititians that write our laws are unfortunatly subsurvient to their constituants such as the religious community along with a slew of human rights organizations that think they have the answeres to everything. They don't as we can see on TV everyday watching new cases of child rape, torture, and murder. Put me in charge for one year and the world would cringe with horror over what we do to child rapists in the USA and so would the potential, future rapists.

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peeples 4 years ago from South Carolina

Great hub. As a survivor, thank you for writing this!

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Craig Suits 4 years ago from Florida Author

Hiya Peeples...

Coming from you considering your earlier experiences, your approval of this hub is like a Congressional Metal Of Honor.

I had four children of my own and raised 1 or 2 others. One of my own, Mickey, is now 36 at 6 foot four, 300 pounds so I don't worry much about him anymore. They call him The Gorilla at work but he's still a pussy cat...LOL...

I raised someone elses little girl for seven years in Florida and she is still a major concern in my life. I taught her all I know but then her grandmother got married and took her away.I'm seventy now and I'll probably be worrying about her for the duration.

We cannot tolerate this insanity to go on just hoping for the best like we do with wars. Child abuse MUST be brought to an end. And the only way I know how to do that is to make the punishment unspeakably horrible. The hell with cival rights and 10 to 20 years of appeals.

Would you believe I have a warning on this page right now. They pulled the ads and said it's unsuitable or something like that. I would suggest they review the abduction,rape, and murder of a few child rape cases and then tell me I'm too caustic...

Looks like your doing pretty good considering. That's great news.

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krsharp05 4 years ago from 18th and Vine

Craig, why are you not allowed to advertise?

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Craig Suits 4 years ago from Florida Author

Hiya Krsharp

Beats the hell out of me. A sign just popped up at the header for the last month that only I can view that says:

Please review the automatically generated warning below, and correct the problem if possible. These warnings are only visible to you, the author. Please click on the warning to learn more.

Warning: Advertising has been disabled on this Hub based on moderator review

I don't know, I guess I got a little too descriptive or something like that or even a single word like SOB or bastards. I don't use words any heavier duty than that in any of my writings. Sometimes I would love too like in this case, but I don't use nasty explatives even in two books I've written and a book/movie I'm working on now and that's not easy seeing as the entire world just about is now lacking any kind of decency and respect for anyone or anything.

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krsharp05 4 years ago from 18th and Vine

My personal opinion is that you should be allowed to advertise. You're not saying anything "out of bounds" or sinister.

I was hub hopping today and on another hub about music there was discussion of murder and killing and it was highly advertised. It made me angry that they can advertise and you can't. I think people are afraid of stirring the pot - so to speak. I say, stir the crap out it and wake everyone up. :)

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peeples 4 years ago from South Carolina

Craig, they often take the ads off of my survivor hubs because they are considered too graphic. The messed up part is they may be too graphic for someone who has never gone through anything bad, but the people I write them for have been through it and need to hear that someone else has been through what they have. Thankfully after over a year of having no ads on them they suddenly were back on and the warning was no longer there. Keep this hub up, even if it doesn't have ads! It serves it's own purpose without the ads!

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Craig Suits 4 years ago from Florida Author

Tnx Peoples...

I know what your saying and there's no way I'll pad down the aleady padded down lingo just so some blue haired old lady doesn't get offended. That's why we have chronic social issues in this country. No one wants to take a stand. We continue to fight our social wars with pea-shooters. It's no wonder they never end.

Thanks for your concern...

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