67 "Miracle of Our Love"- a poem

Love will keep you warm.


Miracle of Our Love



When there is snow on the ground,

And there is snow all around,

I long for your head on my shoulder.



When the skies are clear and blue,

My mind is only on you,

And I never want to get any older.


All the days that we are apart,

You will always hold my heart,

You keep me from getting any colder.


Your love makes me brave and strong,

With you in my life nothing can go wrong,

You take my hand and I always feel bolder.


When finally our lives become one,

Together we will enjoy the sun,

And I will forever be your holder.

Greg


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uzma shaheen 4 years ago from Lahore,Pakistan

beautiful poem.

"When finally our lives become one,

Together we will enjoy the sun,

And I will forever be your holder."

liked these optimistic line.


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

H Uzma, Thank you. I like when I say something that someone likes and they point it out. Greg


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phoenix2327 4 years ago from United Kingdom

This is so sweet and heartfelt.

Oh...now you've made me go all misty-eyed. Totally ruins the reputation.

Seriously, it's a lovely poem.

Voted Up, beautiful. Socially shared.


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Phoenix, Thamk you. I just try to write from my heart and I have a women that gives me inspiration and encouragement that you wouldn't believe. Greg


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breakfastpop 4 years ago

What a tender and beautiful piece.


KatrineDalMonte 4 years ago

Oh Greg it's beautiful. Yes, love is the miracle of life, it's a gift. Wonderfully said :-)


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi BP, comming from you I take that as a real compliment. Greg


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Katrine, Thank you. I love a woman's point of view. My poems are always written for the woman I love and she always says they are wonderful. But then, I do believes she loves me too. It's nice when I get a compliment from another woman. Greg


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful. never grow older, That's love...Bravo.


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b. Malin 4 years ago

Lovely Poem Greg, from the depth of your Heart...the Love shines through, so Beautifully.


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Ruby, Thank you. As the old saying goes, " I may be getting older, but I refuse to grow up". Young at heart forever. Greg


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Malin, Thank you. As long as she keeps seeing my love shine through. She hasn't given up on me yet and I doubt she ever will. Greg


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Wonderful heartfelt poem, voted up and beautiful, Joyce.


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teaches12345 4 years ago

What a beautiful poem! I love the romantic flow of the verses and the thought that together can be a forever dream.


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Joyce, Thank you for the comment and the vote. Greg


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Teach, Thank you. I prefer poetry with a flowing rythem too. Greg


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

That was so pretty Gregas


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Fish, Thank you. Pretty is as pretty does and she deserves pretty. Greg


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Gracenduta 4 years ago from Kenya

Nice love poem


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Grace, Thank you for the visit and comment. Greg


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Eliza57 4 years ago

Very beautiful. Comes from the bottom of your heart.......she must be a very lovely and special lady.


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Eliza, Thank you. Yes, she is a lovely and very special lady. Greg


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The Frog Princess 4 years ago from Florence area of the Great Pee Dee of South Carolina

Such a well written poem. Brings peace to my heart.

Donna


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Donna, Thank you for the kind and heart warming compliment. Greg


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rowley14t 4 years ago

Thank you Greg, for sharing this poem. It has reminded me, as I am constantly reminded, of the love I have for the one who inspires my life and my creativity.


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon

beautiful work, Greg, well done


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Rowley, Thank you. I know the inspiration really helps. And she does encourage. Greg


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Guy, Thank you very much for yhe comment. Greg


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pinto2011 4 years ago from New Delhi, India

The most beautiful way of reminding how we human beings are bestowed with this great emotion and we have nailed it. A simply great hub.


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Pinto, Thank you. It is a great emotion. If only more people would show that feeling. Greg


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Very well said, Greg. You're a deep thinker, I see.


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Avian, Thank you. It's not hard to think deep when you have the time to really let your mind go. Luckily, right now I have just that with my real inspiration in California. Greg


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Kamalesh050 4 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

Enjoyed the poem. It's absolutely Wonderful. You have written this love poem with a lot of feelings from your deep inside!

Thanks for sharing. Voted Up & Awesome.

Best Wishes, Kamalesh


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Kamalesh, Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the votes. Greg


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Rusti Mccollum 4 years ago from Lake Oswego, Oregon

That was so beautiful. Really. Great hub!


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Rusti, Thank you for the lovely comment. Greg


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

How loving and heart-warming, beautifully written!


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi BMax, Thank you very much. Greg


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sheilanewton 4 years ago from North Shields, UK

Voted up - this is awesome - and beautiful. Thank you for a great read.


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Made 4 years ago from Finland

Beautiful!


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Bonitaanna 4 years ago from Oil City, PA

Thank you Greg, That is very beautiful and very emotional for one who loves poetry. Not many men understand how deep are the beautiful words that can touch a womans heart. Keep writing them, you are a rare jewel!


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Sheila, Thank you for the visit and the vote, and thanke toe the vote. Greg


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Made, The you for the visit. Greg


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gregas 4 years ago from Corona, California. Author

Hi Bonita, Thank you for the very encouraging comment. Greg


Sueswan 4 years ago

Hi Gregas

"All the days that we are apart,

You will always hold my heart,

You keep me from getting any colder."

Sweet, tender and so romantic.

Voted up and away!

Enjoy your weekend. :)


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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

"And I will forever be your holder"

Beautiful expression of love...

Great poetry my friend


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shalini sharan 4 years ago from Delhi

beautiful poem

truly brings out your love for your beloved. touches my heart :)


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Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

Very beautiful, sorry I missed this. Voting up.


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denden mangubat 3 years ago from liloan, cebu, philippines

romantic


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April Dawn Meyer 3 years ago from Belle Fourche, South Dakota

Gorgeous! Thanks for posting. Voted up :)


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KenDeanAgudo 3 years ago from Tiwi, Philippines

Such a beautiful poem =)


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deborahmorrison1 23 months ago from Hamilton, Ontario, Canada

Lovely poem and perfect for this winter season ... romantic and heart-warming.


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deborahmorrison1 22 months ago from Hamilton, Ontario, Canada

A lovely poem, and does keep you warm on a cold winter's day.

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