A Time So Right

In my dreams you're holding me

light of day or dark of night


Breathing in the scent of you

a heart's comfort that feels right


Completely spellbound in this moment

mind in motion, dreams in flight


Eyes misty, heart in yearning

flashbacks from a time so right


It's always gonna be you......always gonna be you I'm looking for



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capncrunch 5 years ago from New Orleans

Hello DexisView,

You have said it so well with these words!


Fay Paxton 5 years ago

Beautiful!


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DexisView 5 years ago from New England Author

capncrunch & Fay ~ glad you enjoyed it. Thanks


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Docmo 5 years ago from UK

n my dreams you're holding me

light of day or dark of night

Breathing in the scent of you

a heart's comfort that feels right

mmmmm. exquisitely rendered and so sensuous. Love it Dexis.. Irish passion flows through your words. sláinte !


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DexisView 5 years ago from New England Author

Thanks, Docmo! Irish passion there is indeed. Glad it came through in my words...and that you enjoyed it.


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

s o much depth in so few words- Beautiful. Well done


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DexisView 5 years ago from New England Author

thanks, dim...love that you felt it


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Rooskaya 5 years ago from Russia

A well written hub. Words have powers. You prove it. Thanks for sharing your hub. Voted up!!


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DexisView 4 years ago from New England Author

I've always believed in the power of words, Rooskaya...both written and spoken. Thanks for stopping by.

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