Come diving with me


Come Diving With Me


Come diving with me into the rivers of love.


Let’s plunge deeply into each other’s hearts until there’s not even a mile of air above.


I want to submerge myself in the waters of your love if you will only take that chance.


Dive deep into the abyss of true love and there all of our senses will be enhanced.


I’m going in, head first, arms wide, eye’s closed, and heart open, I’m diving for you.


Will you dive for me too?


I will not push and I will not shove.


Will you drown yourself in the endless ocean of my love?


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writer20 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

Wonderful love poem


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ubanichijioke 5 years ago from Lagos

A masterpiece! Well written words, meaningful and touching. You ve the talent far beyond many people. A soft heart and a charming face. May love treat you kindly. Voted beautiful and awesome


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Thank you for the your wonderful comment Writer20!

Ubani you have touched my heart with your sweet comment! Thank you!


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you...

Aw so beautiful. And I love diving with someone so much.. :)

I loved the photo, too. I think I used the same from my poem, "On Clouds" http://hubpages.com/literature/On-Clouds


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Thank you soo much, and its wonderful that you have someone diving with you! I love the photo also when I saw it I knew it was the one I wanted to use!


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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

Fabulous love poem.

Thank you for sharing.


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

No, thank YOU for reading it, it has made me happy!

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