Go Beyond What My Eyes Can See
Love With The Light on
I am so relaxed when I come home and my love is near
I enjoy just walking through the door after a hard days work
I am transformed each day by the uniqueness of our passions we share
To be an equal provider and constantly lending each other a helping hand
We continually attempt to do more than what is expected of us
We keep making plans and discuss are future
There are no strings attached and no sadness for are shortcomings
Each time we have learned are love matures deeper and deeper
We find enormous satisfaction through are caring and compassion
If it is a smile,a nod that we are awake and still standing
A look that transends what we know
Just being in the same room and breathing together in symphony
The electrifing feeling of what we still don't know about each other
It can only be understood when we realize
How much we have done together
In an instant we are at each others side
Not just we are sick,worried confused and upset
When the whole world seems to get unraveled
We pull it together and make it work
To feel the sensations of familiararity
The closeness we can not always explain
When you call I am running
It can be only one thing
A true companionship
A love that will survive over the ages
Appreciated and respected
For what meaning it brings
To all of live in the end
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So beautiful, Dream On! Sounds as though your relationship is quite lovely and divine. A true life partner. I love reading of such beautiful existing relationships... very inspiring! :D
Not to pick, yet I've noticed you use the word 'are' instead of 'our' in comments and writing... Reminds me of me.. lol.. I often type 'here' when I mean 'hear' and vice vera..
Great to read more of you.. have a lovely day.
invictus I welcome all suggestions.You help me become a better writer.I have always admired your beautiful hubs.You have a great gift.I constantly use are and our all the time.My wife proof reads my writing when she can.This time she was a sleep and I know if I put off a hub I will never publish it.So I say here goes.If you have any ways to help me I would appreciate it.
I really enjoy your writing because it is straight from the heart it is real time dimentional reading. If you want to spice it up with fancy words.. after writing or while writing have a Thesaurus on hand (and a dictionary) . When, I have a line in my head or even a word like 'love' or 'dream' , or anything, I'l look it up in the Thesaurus to see what other words could be used. Sometimes what I see takes me to looking up another from the choices to get deeper or better choices.. the Thesaurus is key. Sometimes I'll just read through it just to get ideas and plant new words in my mind. It so helps open up our vocabulary.
All in all, it seems continually writing naturally opens up how we express and I really enjoy your works.. :)
I am on the right track.I just started having both by my side.I went one step farther and I put a little pen mark besides each word I use.Then I put a piece of paper in the page.I somehow use the same words over and over again.I think the same.Change is slow.
Well, to me the key is it comes from your heart. I really enjoy your writing and using different words can be challenging. I feel chalenged sometimes too. Since I write so much about love, I feel it could get rather monotonous.. Enjoy writing how you feel.. It's all good. :)
For the hub that you read I had 15 pages of interesting love and I figured I better down size it a bit.I sometimes fall in love with the steps as I rewrite and see the hub come alive before my eyes.I still do alot on the old notebook and pen so I can see my transformation to the end result.
yeah.. nothing beats scribbling it out on paper first. I typically leave a line in between each written for changes..but yeah, getting it all out and saving them is great. I loved the length of your hub.. and it was very thorough.. look forward to revisions. :) I gotta go so nice chatting.
hiya have been working all weekend.... am just going in again now..... catch up later. O.K.
Poet We all have to work that is what pays the bills.See ya..
This is a beautiful and awesome hub my friend, you are so lucky you have experiances this kind of love. Great poem...loved it.
where are you......
Dream On...
This is a lovely feeling to share and it becomes sweeter and more meaningful when you share it with friends. It truly shows how devoted the two of you are and why you remain together! Nice hub!
warmest regards and blessings to you both,
Al
Love can bring meaning, which is perhaps its most precious gift. Beautifully written.
Darlene Sabella,Poetlorraine,Mytique,Phillip Carey61 Thanks for all your support and comments.I hope you all keep coming back for more.
This is simply beautiful, buddy!!!!
Carolina Muscle top of the morning to you.Glad you enjoyed it.
Oh , Wow, I wish I'd written that. !!
Dim Flaxenwick maybe you did help me in spirit.There are many interesting things we are still learning about the secrets of are minds and the universe.Thanks for the help and maybe I can help you with one of yours soon.
This is great. If I were only still alive. Thanks
Micky Dee Every time I see your picture I want to exercise.You remind me to get moving.Thanks for the quick reminder.
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