This is a Forum... we don't usually read Hubs here. I note that you have just joined HP and perhaps have not read the FAQ section here. So start at 'my account' and work through the process.
If you post your work in forums... your tips on unhappy customers will not work.. as you will have unhappy hubbers (which I see you have not covered in your post)
If you copy this into a hub format, dress it up and publish it, then you will have completed your first hub and members will visit your site, reveiw your work and comment on it. You may also gain fans. This will also help you gain a hub score; which needs to reach 75 to gain you real benefits.