I'd like feedback on my Hub: The Phantom Clowns

  1. T T Wright profile image72
    T T Wrightposted 2 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub The Phantom Clowns. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. colorfulone profile image85
    colorfuloneposted 2 years ago

    Grammar, spelling, punctuation, and spaces between paragraphs just to name a few problems.

    Is English not your first language?