I'd like feedback on my Hub: schizophrenia mental disorder

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    Ahmedammaroooposted 2 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub schizophrenia mental disorder (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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    psycheskinnerposted 2 years ago

    For a start you need to not have the article be in all bond font.  Also dopamine is one word.

    My feeling is that you should quote the actual criteria for a mental illness from a reputable source like the DSM.  Then add surrounding material based on your insight, expertise, or extensive research.  Mental illness is not a subject that benefits from cursory coverage.