I'd like feedback on my Hub: lostworld

  1. Nawagummy profile image61
    Nawagummyposted 23 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub lostworld (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Rupert Taylor profile image100
      Rupert Taylorposted 23 months agoin reply to this

      There are many grammar errors in your poem. Your images are not credited so we cannot know if you have permission to use them.
      Much of your poem makes no sense to me; this couple of lines for example
      "People keep blaming on me on what happen
      Every time they did that I endure all the time to keep hold of it"
      You need to read the HP Learning Center.