I'd like feedback on my Hub: Creativity Is the Key

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    Nekkieposted 20 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Creativity Is the Key (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image99
    Rupert Taylorposted 20 months ago

    There are numerous grammar problems with this piece.

    "Being Creative is a big word (actually it's two words and the second one should not be capitalized), with even bigger aspirations that comes to it (this doesn't follow logically and doesn't make any sense). Many people have something that they make them creative (are you trying to say people have skills that make them creative? The sentence is very clumsy)."

    The article seems to have very little to do with creativity and slips into a rant about unkind people.

    It's too short. You really need to read and absorb the contents of the Learning Center.