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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Shedding excess Weight !

  1. Sebastian Franzen profile image62
    Sebastian Franzenposted 12 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Shedding excess Weight !. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 12 months ago in reply to this

      There are few things that are preventing your hub being approved.

      1. Break up the text into paragraphs and smaller text capsules. Many people access the web via mobile devices. When they see a massive block of text they tend to press 'back' very quickly.

      2. Put your text through a grammar checker - there are several errors.

      3. Take the 'bold' off the text.

      4. Your hub is competing in an overcrowded niche.

      5. HubPages seems to be discouraging personal accounts lately. Your hub reads more like a blog post - and perhaps that is the best place for it.

      6. You have a strange man doing press-ups at the end of the hub. The photo is not accredited.

      Go here: https://hubpageshelp.com/

      I'm sure you can do better and make HubPages work for you.

      1. Sebastian Franzen profile image62
        Sebastian Franzenposted 12 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks for the advice !

        1. theraggededge profile image95
          theraggededgeposted 12 months ago in reply to this

          There is never a space before an exclamation mark. Use them sparingly, and never in titles!

          big_smile

 
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