I'd like feedback on my Hub: FOREIGN SCHOLARS OF HINDI LANGUAGE

  1. RUPAL PANDEY profile image60
    RUPAL PANDEYposted 8 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub FOREIGN SCHOLARS OF HINDI LANGUAGE (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. AshutoshJoshi06 profile image85
      AshutoshJoshi06posted 8 months ago in reply to this

      Hey Rupal,
      I think its too brief. An intro into the hub would help. Adding relevant pictures and informative video would be good.

      Personally I don't have many hubs myself but this bit helps.

      Cheers!! Welcome to HubPages

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image95
    Rupert Taylorposted 8 months ago

    There are several issues here.

    Never use all caps in a headline; on the Internet this is viewed as the equivalent of shouting.

    The Hub is too short; somewhere around 1,000 words is a good target to aim for.

    Images and videos are needed to enhance the appearance of a Hub.

    These problems are easy to fix, but the biggest difficulty is that your use of English is not up to the standard needed and that is not simple to correct.

 
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