I'd like feedback on my Hub: Rejuvenate a Boring Relationship

  1. MKishor profile image87
    MKishorposted 7 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I am new to the Hubpages, trying to learn its rules and regulations. Meanwhile, I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Rejuvenate a Boring Relationship (must be signed in to view).

    I have tried to improve it by changing texts and title but still it is not allowing to publish. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 7 months ago in reply to this

      Hi there,

      There are grammatical problems all the way through. You met an amazing lady AT the breakfast table, not on it. That's a whole different scenario big_smile

      The fact that it's written in the first person may be a problem too, for the category you've chosen. It reads more like fiction than a factual article.

 
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