Feedback on Hub Please!

  1. Rachel Roodhardt profile image81
    Rachel Roodhardtposted 7 months ago

    Hiya,

    I'd be enormously grateful for feedback on this hub.  It was featured before I submitted it for a network site and now it's not.  Hence, rejected for network site.

    http://hubpages.com/travel/flying-with- … abin-to-UK

    Thanks in advance!

  2. psycheskinner profile image80
    psycheskinnerposted 7 months ago

    It is a useful topic but might make more sense if you started general and then gave the specific example, rather than the other way around.  I would also note re: "The exception to this rule is if you are travelling with an Assistance Dog which is registered to assist you with your disability." That service and emotional support animals are not registered, and registry of them is actually not permitted under the Americans with Disabilities act.

  3. Rachel Roodhardt profile image81
    Rachel Roodhardtposted 7 months ago

    Thanks psycheskinner..  I've edited the reference to assistance dogs.  Not sure about rewriting it upside down, but if there are a few more people saying the same then I'll do it!

    Any more feedback out there?

 
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