I'd like feedback on my Hub: The Prince of Jokers.

  1. hla ehab profile image61
    hla ehabposted 7 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub The Prince of Jokers. (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 7 months ago in reply to this

      Hi there,

      You need to work on your punctuation. There is never a space before a comma or a full stop/period. There is always a space after them. New sentences, especially the first sentence in the article, should begin with a capital (upper case) letter.

      Your hub is titled The Prince of Jokers (no full stop/period necessary in the title), but you write about two different people. Why not include more information about the first one and then write another hub about the second. Be careful of reproducing material that is readily available all over the web.

      Hope that helps.

      1. hla ehab profile image61
        hla ehabposted 7 months ago in reply to this

        Thank you a lot .

 
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