I'd like feedback on my Hub: lds engineers

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    sarmistha1posted 9 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub lds engineers (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image100
      theraggededgeposted 9 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      You'll never get that one approved.

      1. It's too short.
      2. Title is unsuitable.
      3. English is poor.
      4. You've used the keywords, 'data management' six times in two short paragraphs.
      5. You're not allowed to promote a business.

      Sorry.

  2. firstcookbooklady profile image86
    firstcookbookladyposted 9 months ago

    For one moment, I pictured someone swinging a padded stick and hitting a gong.

 
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