I'd like feed back on my Hub: A Helping Hand vs. Divine Intervention

  1. Luke Holm profile image96
    Luke Holmposted 8 months ago

    I was wondering if you could help me improve my hub "A Helping Hand vs. Divine Intervention".  It is currently unfeatured and I can't figure out why.  Thank you for your help!  Here is a link: http://hubpages.com/religion-philosophy … tervention

    1. tamarawilhite profile image93
      tamarawilhiteposted 8 months agoin reply to this

      * Perhaps fewer Biblical stories so the meat of your story with the homeless woman stands out
      * Hubs in general are best stand alone, instead of referring to the other hub. Could you put that story, rewritten, in the current hub and then lead into the comparison?
      * Move the poll down much farther in the article if you keep it at all. 2 polls, though, is too much.
      * Too many external links, though relevant explanations of the terms
      * The graphics are fine to me.

 
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