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I'd like feedback on my Hub: A place that has not been discovered by Travelers.

  1. Theshahrukhkhan profile image61
    Theshahrukhkhanposted 6 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub A place that has not been discovered by Travelers. Unseen Places to explore happiness. (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 6 months ago in reply to this

      Sorry but your hub falls well below the standard required.

      http://hubpageshelp.com

  2. AshutoshJoshi06 profile image84
    AshutoshJoshi06posted 6 months ago

    I suggest you shorten the title and make it more precise and relevant. Please proofread the entire hub. There are gramatical errors. Do correct the second last sentence.
    You would also want to avoid too much pluralization. Add little more description to your sub heads.

    All the best!

  3. Rupert Taylor profile image95
    Rupert Taylorposted 6 months ago

    The quality of your English is just not good enough.

    Kurnool is a place of [the] Mughals and [the] British Raj with many untold histories [should be stories].

    Kurnool is not [that much famous like a] Taj Mahal, [Kumool is not as famous as the Taj Mahal]

    but it is the most Historic area with many Temples and Sunny Climates. [but is an historic area with many temples and a sunny climate]

    What attracts the most in this place is Forts. [A major attraction is the forts].

    The rest of the Hub is filled with grammatical errors.

    1. Theshahrukhkhan profile image61
      Theshahrukhkhanposted 6 months ago in reply to this

      Thank you, sir, I appreciate it. I don't have any teacher who can teach me about my mistakes. I will try my best to improve my skills.

      1. theraggededge profile image95
        theraggededgeposted 6 months ago in reply to this

        HubPages is aimed at an English-speaking readership, therefore all articles have to be written to a reasonable standard. If you don't have anyone who can proofread your work, you may have to consider waiting until your English skills are improved.

 
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